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Misty Meadow

As the sunlight first glows warm Shining beneath the amber clouds The mist lays gently on the meadow A peaceful blanket for the earth. The birds waken to feed their young The owls close their eyes for rest The shafts of grass begin to sway As wind picks up to kiss the mist. Although it lingers for but a while It has given moisture to the plant And a peaceful picture for us to see Calming the soul as we begin the day.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 10/31/2016 8:38:00 PM
This is absolutely beautiful A soothing, comforting feeling floats within your words.
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Chris Green
Date: 11/1/2016 7:16:00 AM
Wow, if this was one of your early attempts at poetry, then you my friend are a natural.
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Betty Janko
Date: 10/31/2016 8:53:00 PM
Thanks Chris, believe it or not, this was one of my earliest poems last year before I began to learn more about rhyming and formatting. My journey has been 22 months in the process and there is so much more to learn. Thanks for the kind words. Betty

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