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Misty Dreams Upon the Deep

I love the child who steers this riverboat, Though he seems crazy, for the deep. The river seems dreamlike, in the moonlight-- Someone keeps creeping, in my sleep. And dreams, of rolling river-- Of water swell, and waves that creep Upon the beach while in the moonlight glow, Surprise the sands, and the corals sweep. Sail on, you rolling river, Of choice and chance, and misty dream-- My reverie upon the deep, That haunts my soul, but will not keep! M :)

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Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 4/24/2014 12:32:00 AM

Great poem Mel.It costs nothing to dream. Thanks for sharing your dream... Lucilla

Mel Merrill
Date: 4/24/2014 1:40:00 AM

Thank you for sharing it. You're a sweetheart--and a gifted poet. Hugs :) Mel

Paddi March

Date: 4/23/2014 6:00:00 PM

You have a talent Mel. This poem is a little haunting and some of the lines are special. . Love this line, I seriously do:- "The river seems dreamlike, in the moonlight"

Mel Merrill
Date: 4/24/2014 1:43:00 AM

Thank you Paddi. I am grateful for your taking the time to read my poem, and to comment--and nicely so. I look forward to reading more of your creative writes. Hugs :) Mel

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/23/2014 9:42:00 AM

Back again Mel, this time, not to smile, but to enjoy the free style of your poem. Interesting title of your poems. (it kind of gives it a foggy look) It did not prepare sheer beauty, however you've woven deep in the mantra of your own dreams, and the translation of your soul and it's expressions, while deep and under them zz's. I enjoyed many of the teasing lines, especialy the dreamlike imagery. Excellent... Forever~ LINDA

Mel Merrill
Date: 4/23/2014 9:49:00 AM

Thanks my sweet, for the read and the incredibly kind and intelligent comment. And so I leave, smiling and inspired to write another day. Thank you, my dear friend. Yours always, Mel :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/23/2014 9:29:00 AM

Why You make me laugh and smile tooooo Mel :) Thanks for the words.... Linda

Mel Merrill
Date: 4/23/2014 11:57:00 AM

Love your writes, Linda. I really do. Poet without a cause...Tee Hee Hey girl, thanks for honoring me with your visit and kind words, oh great one! See ya soon, Mel :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/23/2014 8:06:00 AM

This river runs wide and deep. I enjoyed the images that flickered on my minds eye. Great use of rhyme for effect and mood.

Mel Merrill
Date: 4/23/2014 12:00:00 PM

Richard, you're a gentleman and a scholar. Thank you again for reading my verse, and for appreciating it. It means a lot. Mel :)

Pace Ink-U-Script

Date: 4/22/2014 9:03:00 AM

Lol at your repsonse to Anne.."Guess I''ll go follow a Dream"..I'm really lost for words with you and your work Mel. You are now a fav poet of mine.

Mel Merrill
Date: 4/22/2014 12:12:00 PM

It's my dry wit, which is sadly wasted too often. Glad you get it. Now go arrest somebody! Later, dude. Mel :)

Casarah Nance

Date: 4/22/2014 8:07:00 AM

Beautifully written as always my dear, your canvas is painted with lovely words. *yeah yeah you rock* :-P

Mel Merrill
Date: 4/22/2014 7:32:00 PM

I do. It's the cross I bear. A painting? You now how things worked out for Van Gogh. Better unload my gun :) Thank you sweetheart :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/22/2014 2:07:00 AM

- All your dreams can come true if you have the courage and the will to follow them. - A lovely poem dear friend Mel. - I wish you a nice day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Mel Merrill
Date: 4/22/2014 3:08:00 AM

Ah, my sweet. The first to comment on this write. Thank you. I'm not a free-verse guy (whatever that is), but this felt okay. Will be by soon. Guess I'll go follow a dream. oxox Mel :)