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Misty Day

Misty Day Glancing out of the window I see the potted plant on the sill and the house on the other side of the road… the light is fading and the plant looks as sad as a whitewashed wall in rain… its whiteness was an illusion caused by the sun. Mist of grief encircles olive trees there are blank tears on my almond tree´s spindly twigs, yet inside each droplet I see a tiny world reflecting my own, only with greater incorruptibility of the untested. And far away, as a whisper, a mother sings a lullaby.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/23/2012 12:28:00 PM
Wonderful reading your excellent poetry today Jan. Love, Carol
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Jan Oskar Hansen
Date: 10/23/2012 1:45:00 PM
thank you Carol
Date: 10/23/2012 6:46:00 AM
Dear Jan, this one worries me. My friend, a droplet now on the edge of an olive tree. No more scooter days. Give us a wink in your next one, so I know the child is there. love, Kathy
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Jan Oskar Hansen
Date: 10/23/2012 7:08:00 AM
do not worry dear kathy
Date: 10/23/2012 5:32:00 AM
lovely write Jan
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Date: 10/23/2012 5:25:00 AM
sadly written and with great skill
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Jan Oskar Hansen
Date: 10/23/2012 7:09:00 AM
thank you doris
Date: 10/23/2012 3:22:00 AM
Fasinating
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Jan Oskar Hansen
Date: 10/23/2012 4:43:00 AM
thank you john

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