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Mister Summer Man

Methinks I'll write about snow today It's a subject about which I've known Canadian by birth, so snow is no stranger As a kid many snowballs I've thrown But now that I'm old, damn snow's a pain Winter without snow would be grand Driving in snow, our lives are in jeopardy Perhaps a hospital visit unplanned Who was the first to say, “snow is beautiful” Snow has no redeeming factors Causes accidents and all kinds of bad stuff I'm the biggest damn snow detractor It has no good qualities that I can see You can't cook it, can't fry it, no use Just lies there causing a whole bunch of crap I've actually fallen on my caboose So the sooner it's spring the better I say And survive another winter season Not looking forward to the next three months I'm Mr. Summer Man, that's the reason © Jack Ellison 2013

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Date: 12/4/2013 7:31:00 PM
The nearest I get to snow is the buildup of ice in my freezer. I simply love our Mediterranean weather: never too hot; never too cold. Sending you warm smiles to chase at least some of the cold, Santa. Keep warm, Santa. Smoocherhuggies, Licia :-)
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Date: 12/4/2013 9:25:00 PM
Smoocherhuggies back at ya my dear Licia! "buildup of ice in my freezer"... I should be so lucky!!! But Santa's supposed to live in a cold area I suppose! Love ya milady! XOXOXOXOX
Date: 12/4/2013 5:52:00 AM
If only snow could perch in pines, blanket those barren fields and rest it's self on mountain peeks divine alone... Then it and I would get along just fine! I'm with you Jack, summer baby all the way :-) Wonderful poem
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Date: 12/4/2013 7:04:00 AM
Summer all the way baby!!!!!! You and I are kindred souls my dear Sarai! Have a bright, sunshiny day my love... XOXOXOXOXOX
Date: 12/3/2013 7:01:00 PM
I don't write poetry Jack but I do love reading good poetry and in my mind this is one, very good writing, loved it. Vera.
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Date: 12/3/2013 7:18:00 PM
Well thank you my dear Vera for your very kind words! Do drop by again... hugs, Jack xox
Date: 12/3/2013 3:30:00 PM
Nice one Jack, I love your writing style and the flow of the poem....Roger
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Date: 12/3/2013 4:08:00 PM
Hey Roger... a great big thanks my friend! Jack
Date: 12/3/2013 3:25:00 PM
Jack great one here I agree when I was a child it was fun but not so much anymore
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Date: 12/3/2013 4:08:00 PM
Ain't that the truth!!! Thanks for dropping by, Joseph!
Date: 12/3/2013 11:13:00 AM
Yep... You're definitely are a grown up... It might help to be a snow bird and come south to Arizona for a few months of the winter... Dragon would love to see you... Getting our 1st snow and ice this week.
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Date: 12/3/2013 11:18:00 AM
Wouldn't I love that!!! Arizona GETS SNOW???? That's just not right! LOL XOXOXOX
Date: 12/3/2013 8:49:00 AM
Ha. Snowball fortresses & wars! Those were the days. GIve me Spring or Fall anyday, though. Fun read! =D
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Date: 12/3/2013 8:55:00 AM
AH! Snow fortresses! YUP! Remember them well! But those days were long long ago... spring, summer, fall... that's where it's at! Thank you my good friend!

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