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Mistaken Identity

Down around ankles were his trousers as he caressed her he said wowzers finding there no lady it was all so shady as he always seemed to pick posers written 05/22/2014 contest Bawdy, Bawdy Bawdy Miss Clawdy

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Abdulhafeez Oyewole

Date: 6/17/2014 9:24:00 AM

Awesome bawdy.. Congrats on your win, Shadow.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/14/2014 12:11:00 AM

Shadow,, :) Congratulations, on your win. "Luv Linda"

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/9/2014 6:07:00 PM

I may copy and paste congrats but I have read your work and find it exceptional…Sara

Elaine George

Date: 6/9/2014 1:12:00 PM

Toooooooooooooo funny. Lol. Many congrat's,Shadow. Elaine

Mohan Chutani

Date: 6/9/2014 12:38:00 AM

Nice Limerick, Shadow. Congratulations on the win. Mohan

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/8/2014 8:33:00 AM

So pleased to see this gem on the list Shadow.

Skat A

Date: 6/8/2014 7:32:00 AM

Shadow,, Congrats, on your "Bawdy, Bawdy, Bawdy, Miss Clawdy" win........ Enjoyable Limerick :) LOVE ~SKAT~

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/7/2014 9:50:00 PM

Congratulations on your fine win with this well humored limerick, shadow

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/7/2014 9:49:00 PM

Congrats on the win, Shadow. My favorite part was trousers rhymed with wowzers!!!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/29/2014 5:13:00 AM

Reads like a winner to me..Way to go for the contest...Thanks for the visit to my page..Your comments are uplifting..I guess this man was really surprised..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/23/2014 8:12:00 PM

Awesome last line!!

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 5/23/2014 11:19:00 AM

This is good and you did a great job. Thanks for sharing... Lucilla

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/22/2014 11:00:00 PM

hahaha, you could have made this even bawdier. but this sure gets the message across. Oh, I just saw the last line needs one more syllable. HUrry and change it. Maybe you could say: "oh, why did he always pick posers?" (see the blog that Roy just did about making sure the limericks are right) With that change I think you will be on the winners' list.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/22/2014 4:24:00 PM

Oooh, what a surprise? Did you see "The Crying Game"? This is just what happened to Steven Rea. You'll definitely win with this one! If I could give it a 10, I would. Love, Carolyn

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/22/2014 9:02:00 AM

That would certainly be a surprise! Good luck in the contest Shadow. ;0)

Casarah Nance

Date: 5/22/2014 8:20:00 AM

haha funny. good luck, a humorous limmerick indeed. :)