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MISSISSIPPI M y love for the magnolia tree I s a botanist dream. S omething special to see S o white, magnolia gleams! I f I had a choice of trees, S omeone suggestion was S pruce, I would say I like my State’s tree. P lus the bloom is as white as the clouds. P lease give me the magnolia I adore right now. Mississippi is where I am from – Old Magnolia. M y love of the mocking bird I s a bird watchers dream. S omething special to see S irens singing! I f I had a choice of birds, S omeone suggested one different, S uch as the Three Wrens, I would say I like my State’s bird. P lus, they sing a beautiful song. P lease, the mocking bird that I adore. Mississippi is where I am from – Old Magnolia & the Mocking Bird. M y home is The Magnolia State. I ce is what winter creates. S pectacular the crystal glows. S nowflakes hang from the trees. I cicles drip. S nowfall has appeared. S unshine is desired. I ce water caught in a bucket. P itchers of Kool-Aid to drink P eople are feeling holistic. I mages of happiness and a change of seasons Mississippi is where I am from. Old Magnolia, the Mocking Bird, my home sweet home… __________________________________________/ Sponsor: Kim Merryman Contest Name: Tell Me About Where You're From Form: A Triple Acoustic 5th place

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Date: 4/22/2014 1:44:00 PM
Great write plus lovely to read. Well done on this quill. Big congrats to you on your win in the contest.
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 4/22/2014 1:47:00 PM
Thanks for your congratulations Abdulhafeez... Verlena
Date: 4/21/2014 6:38:00 PM
Great praise for your beloved home. I would like to visit Mississippi. congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 4/22/2014 12:29:00 AM
thanks joyce for your supportive remarks... Verlena
Date: 4/21/2014 10:11:00 AM
Oh, just passed thro' Mississippi often. Write full of feelings and emotions, Congrats on the win, Verlena
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 4/21/2014 10:17:00 AM
Thanks Ram... Verlena
Date: 4/21/2014 5:12:00 AM
Hi Verlana, it is unbelievable that where I have struggled to write one, you have come up with three. remarkable. keep up the good work..Congrats to you dear!!
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Archana Garg
Date: 4/21/2014 8:07:00 AM
I totally agree with Nair. I also struggled hard to write one.....Kudos....Congrats
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 4/21/2014 5:14:00 AM
Thanks Jag... Verlena
Date: 4/21/2014 1:27:00 AM
Awesome write Verlena ,,, great win on great poetry,, congrats !
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 4/21/2014 2:25:00 AM
Thanks Upma.. Verlena
Date: 4/3/2014 3:35:00 AM
Oh Beautiful! Definite high placement there. You made the place sound like heaven.,
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 4/3/2014 4:33:00 AM
Thanks for your support Amy... Verlena
Date: 4/2/2014 9:36:00 PM
Excellent Acrostic Poem....you had me smiling when you mentioned the Pitchers of Kool-Aid...lol...Enjoyed your poem.
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 4/2/2014 9:48:00 PM
Thanks Pace... Verlena

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