Missing You

Wake up at Midnight Dreaming about your sweet eyes Lost in the valley of dreams Hold you with my hands Wishing to choose other path Desiring to turn back time For Oh How I Miss You Poetry Contest Sponsored by Cecelia Hopkins-Drewer August 13, 2017

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Agnes Krampe

Date: 8/25/2017 5:37:00 PM

Congrats on your placement, Nayda.

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 8/24/2017 5:47:00 PM

This is beautiful, Nayda - congratulations! :-)

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 8/24/2017 7:39:00 PM

Thank you Greg.

Heidi Sands

Date: 8/24/2017 5:35:00 PM

Congratulations Nayda :)

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 8/24/2017 7:42:00 PM

Thank you Heidi.

Cecelia Hopkins-Drewer

Date: 8/24/2017 5:25:00 PM

Regrets captured well Nayda.

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 8/24/2017 7:40:00 PM

Indeed Cecelia. Thank you.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/14/2017 4:18:00 PM

nayda,such a pensive work with much longing.. one of your aces is the tanka.. lovely!..huggs

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 8/14/2017 4:36:00 PM

Thank you Nette.