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Missing You

You filled my lungs, When I needed oxygen, You were my energy, Boosted me up like Supligen, You were my sky-scraper, Not just a tent, You were my mortgage, Not just the rent, You were my mountain, And we stood tall, We played lifes' music, You kept me glad, Now your flesh has fallen, But you are next to God, Right to the end, You were my best friend, In my heart, until we meet again....

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Betty Bateson

Date: 6/26/2014 12:38:00 PM

So lovely. To me it seems easier to write poetry about lost love ones. I guess it's because we are always thinking about the one we lost.

Richard Palmer
Date: 6/26/2014 5:39:00 PM

we always are,thank you Betty

Shonie Griffin

Date: 6/26/2014 6:31:00 AM

Wow so intense and sad yet somehow peaceful. Excellent work, But im sad for u too.God bless you, Mr. Palmer.

Richard Palmer
Date: 6/26/2014 5:37:00 PM

thank you Shonie,have a bless day,oxox

Tracy Marie Windisch Mason

Date: 2/22/2013 11:44:00 PM

Dear Richard, I am sorry for your loss.You are lovely.This truly,is beautiful,your poem.Love,and best wishes,Tracy. 10 star,you are.xo.

Richard Palmer
Date: 2/26/2013 6:38:00 PM

honored Tracy,the lost of love ones is never easy,oxox

Mona Jalees

Date: 12/29/2012 11:27:00 AM

I understand the feeling when you miss the person and knowing that he's no more with you .what is more painful when that person is your best friend or anyone close to your heart . well ,it's a great poem .I like it.

Richard Palmer
Date: 12/30/2012 5:13:00 AM

thanks Mona,love your comment

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/24/2012 8:32:00 PM

Richard, Once again, we find ourselves trapped in the Holiday Season. And, hear I am stopping by to say Hi and to wish you a Merry Christmas once again sincerely from my heart. Loving each moment I found comforting here on the soup. Thank you for any comment or support you have offered now or in the past. Love always & forever ~ PD

Richard Palmer
Date: 12/28/2012 8:16:00 AM

hi Destroyer,thank you very much,same to you for the new year

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/1/2012 4:34:00 PM

so sorry for your loss. I came to see this one as I saw it mentioned under comments on Holly's narration about her dearly departed son Joshua. HOpe you are enjoying the Xmas season. Luv, Andrea

Richard Palmer
Date: 12/7/2012 5:40:00 PM

thanks for the love Andrea,enjoy the season too

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/21/2012 9:37:00 PM

Richard,, Stopping by to greet you and every other soup poet, with a special thank you comment, during this wonderful Thanksgiving season. Hope you do not mind the time I am taking to express my sincere appreciation for any support you have offered during the years, or time you have been here on the soup. I am deeply thankful and extend to you my best wishes for a happy and healthy Poetic Magical Thanksgiving Day. *Always & Forever, the Poet Destroyer; -*

Richard Palmer
Date: 11/24/2012 10:46:00 AM

thanks PD,hope you enjoy to the fullest also,bless up bro

Charles Ruble

Date: 11/19/2012 6:47:00 PM

Nice write,sorry I don't comment more on your poems or anyone elses and thank you for the comments on mine.I do not think I am qualified to comment on others poems,I don't know much when it comes to english,barely passed it.Thanks agaain my friend for the comments.

Richard Palmer
Date: 11/21/2012 9:06:00 AM

thats ok Charles life is a learning process,keep learning and thanks

Gwen Benita Mason Gibbs

Date: 11/17/2012 4:11:00 PM

Love this poem, so sweet

Richard Palmer
Date: 11/17/2012 4:21:00 PM

thank you Gwen

Holly Moore

Date: 11/17/2012 2:08:00 PM

Hi, I really like this. I can relate to it. I've read it before, but can read it over and over again. Thanks for your comments. God gave us a special time together - just the three of us. But, things change. xxoo Holly Moore

Richard Palmer
Date: 11/17/2012 2:14:00 PM

hope you know he is still hanging around,your angel now,feel him,thanks Holly

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 11/6/2012 5:16:00 PM

Sounds like you lost someone close and dear; lovely lines to commemorate what they meant to you.

Richard Palmer
Date: 11/7/2012 4:58:00 AM

very dear,thanks Elizabeth

Victoria Anderson-Throop

Date: 11/4/2012 2:07:00 AM

grand tribute to a friendship...joy and sorrow all wrapped into one package...thanks for sharing it...Victoria

Richard Palmer
Date: 11/5/2012 4:51:00 PM

thanks Vic,you are welcome

Bethany St John

Date: 10/28/2012 7:43:00 PM

Beautiful, honest and heartfelt.

Richard Palmer
Date: 10/30/2012 4:55:00 AM

thanks Brithany

Holly Moore

Date: 10/23/2012 8:12:00 PM

Thanks for inviting me to read this. It's a lot like how I feel. It's a very difficult time for me. I'm writing a lot of different poetry which is my therapy. Thank you for commenting on mine, too......Holly Moore

Richard Palmer
Date: 10/30/2012 4:54:00 AM

keep going Holly,you are doing the right thing get it out of your system,thanks

Juniper Lock

Date: 10/22/2012 6:17:00 PM

So lovely and heartfelt, Juniper

Richard Palmer
Date: 10/22/2012 10:24:00 PM

thank you Junipar

Date: 10/19/2012 4:55:00 AM

direct lines clear, dedicated ... I read the title and thought I'd find melancholy .. But you managed to get SURP [rionzi with your vision optimistic, even in times of separation.

Richard Palmer
Date: 10/22/2012 10:23:00 PM

thank you

Carol Eastman

Date: 10/16/2012 2:37:00 PM

A great dedicaton.

Richard Palmer
Date: 10/16/2012 3:31:00 PM

thanks Carol

Omneya Kamal

Date: 10/16/2012 7:34:00 AM

This poem is so sensitive and cute! Love it!

Richard Palmer
Date: 10/16/2012 8:38:00 AM

thanks Omneya

Don Johnson

Date: 10/6/2012 4:58:00 PM

love it mate, great person has shared your fate...

Richard Palmer
Date: 10/16/2012 8:37:00 AM

thanks Don,yes a lot

Henry Datubo

Date: 10/4/2012 6:38:00 PM

Nice piece Richard...

Richard Palmer
Date: 10/5/2012 12:04:00 PM

thanks Henry

Jack Ellison

Date: 9/29/2012 11:36:00 AM

Absolutely beautifully written, my friend... kudos! Cheers, Jack

Richard Palmer
Date: 9/29/2012 3:37:00 PM

cheers to you too Jack,thanks

Justin Bordner

Date: 9/27/2012 1:44:00 PM

This piece would be an angellic eulogy my friend - I admire quality in the juxtapositions Rich - it always feels so good to give credit to our sources of inspiration, thanks for reminding me of this virtue - J.A.B. %

Richard Palmer
Date: 9/27/2012 4:19:00 PM

you are welcome Justin,thank you