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Missing You

She was wonderful and powerful My object of desire Her smooth clean face so beautiful The apple of my eye My love she had an accident She fell from up on high I found her broken body there 'Twas lying on the ground Now all I have's her memory The songs we used to share Oh how I miss that ipod My heart it megahertz

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Monica Evette

Date: 9/19/2010 7:00:00 AM

I almost started crying, lol. I do understand I am highly addicted to and obsessed with my iPod. Very clever write sir, very clever indeed. Love this Monica

Gareth James

Date: 2/18/2010 12:31:00 PM

haha. Brilliant!! you had me going for a nano of a second!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/5/2010 2:45:00 PM

U had me going Nick.. I was ready to run for a tissue when I read the last two lines and smiled again.... very innovative write.. my sons all have ipods so I know how dear they are to all who own them.. luv the "megahertz" ... terrific.. luv.. Linda-Marie

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/5/2010 7:10:00 AM

CLEVER, the apple of your eye!!! Enjoyed meeting a great poet, new for me here! LUv, Andrea

Mary Ann Young

Date: 2/5/2010 5:45:00 AM

i love it it almost made me cry there seems to be a lot of this kind of stuff going around lately.

John Beam

Date: 2/4/2010 8:31:00 AM

funny good punch line thanks for comment on poem yes I was writing along that line for Deborah Guzzi's contest mission impossible!