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Missing You

When asked if I could have a single wish I clear my mind and make my musings still-- What things have been important to me? Friends. So many wants entangle us, but still No other blessing can sustain like friends, No matter who or where, or what we wish. We once were close, moreso than other friends, But now we are estranged; I dearly wish That you were central to my cosmos still, And wish that we were still the best of friends. February 15, 2019

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Date: 6/17/2019 12:10:00 AM
Auld Lang Syne I seem to hear the song singing. Best wishes!
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Date: 2/25/2019 5:11:00 PM
Bravo. Congrats on your win, JP.
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J P Marmaro
Date: 2/25/2019 8:59:00 PM
Thanks again, Line!-- I don't think it's my best work; but the form, like a villanelle, say, though superficially easy, is one in which the repetitiousness makes it actually very difficult to say something cogent and fresh, I find.
Date: 2/24/2019 4:22:00 PM
sadly something many of us can relate to JP, many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
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J P Marmaro
Date: 2/25/2019 8:55:00 PM
I appreciate your kind words, Jan!
Date: 2/24/2019 3:59:00 PM
Awesome write, J.P. Congratulations on your win in my contest. Charlie
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Date: 2/15/2019 10:42:00 PM
Lovely poem, JP. Love it.
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J P Marmaro
Date: 2/16/2019 10:09:00 AM
As ever, Line, thanks so much for your kind encouragement!

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