Missing You - a Collab With James Fraser

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MISSING YOU Feelings of missing you doesn't color a blue instead it paints a hue of paradise view Say a rainbow after rain bathing stargazers in my den or autumn leaves golden brush as slowly they land Thoughts of missing you sets my dreams to vast streams It pleasures me much, hence, I hymn our united theme My voice like the nightingale's it lured ears to stop and hear tugging their heartstrings to come closer and rehear Cool as the sea waves missing you is a ride in rolling tides Partner duo in old or new chores, such is the daily stride tall barriers broken as hearts and lips have spoken Swollen supple from endearing oceans of motions as day and night springs doors of infant tomorrows No sorrows they pray can divide nor square them to zero Blissful this mid blissful that, kisses aplenty within chats true love flowered ahead to ripe red and never flat ___________________________________________________ ©J. A. Fraser and O. E. Guillermo 5:32 pm, March 03, 2015

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/4/2015 4:52:00 AM

- A deeply moving and beautiful collab between you and James (clearly a 7) - If you find "the right partner" to write with, it is a pleasure to do collab :) - I wish you a lovely day, dear friend Olive - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/5/2015 2:47:00 AM

thank you Anne Lise .. :) indeed it is a pleasure and greater fun when you find someone so comfortable to write with.. :)! hugs as well.. ;)!

Jan Allison

Date: 3/3/2015 8:13:00 AM

Beautiful but sad imagery full of intense longing at being parted - my favourite stanza is the first one - with the hope paradise is regained:-) Fab collab Olive and James:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/5/2015 2:23:00 AM

hugs back too JAn.. ) soupmail!!!.. :D Im glad to hear such.. claps!

Jan Allison
Date: 3/4/2015 8:22:00 AM

I am fine Olive - read my poem 'the crying candle' at the service - it was so well received people were asking for copies:-) Hugs Jan xx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/4/2015 7:45:00 AM

thanks much Jan as always.. :)! hugs and ugs.. hoping you are coping well.. :)!