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Missing, the Magic

missing, the magic stars shrink the moon cowers all that's sweet turns sour heartfelt sighs comfort food steam baths no good, no good... O, before ye despair love will repair nature's caprice, no one spares ~ angels in heaven yet care

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Date: 2/9/2022 9:38:00 AM
Though it is harder to recognize these days, magic still remains, if you look a little further. Such a timely verse. ps, Love the reference, "Blood and Guts Wolf" Says so much about you! : )
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/9/2022 11:04:00 AM
Ha, ha! Old Blood and Guts Wolf here thanks for your nice comments, Sandra. And please know that the B in Blood and the G in Guts are really code for 'Building & Grounds,' the maintenance organization at my long-ago college. lol. Thanks again, Gershon, aka 'Wolfman Jack'
Date: 1/25/2022 1:59:00 AM
Straight to my FAVE list. I like everything about it!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/25/2022 6:58:00 PM
Thanks, Caren. On 2nd reading, I see that this is a bit 'lovey-dovey.' ~ Blood and Guts Wolf
Date: 1/21/2022 5:09:00 PM
Hello Gershon ... this covid pandemic is sending people into a spiral of lost magic through the loss of freedom from fear - thanks again Gershon - Lindsay
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Date: 1/17/2022 5:30:00 PM
Oh no, no the universe can't miss it's magic...no! Well penned though, I want that magic back.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/17/2022 7:48:00 PM
Just ask the magician!
Date: 1/16/2022 4:55:00 PM
Gershon, for me, this is a complete poem…total poetry. I cannot say higher. A Fav. Best wishes. Thank you. Thank
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/16/2022 8:29:00 PM
So nice of you to FAVE this one, Sally. Much appreciated, Gershon
Date: 1/16/2022 3:47:00 PM
Is it plausible that I sense  depression as a result of a love that didn't feel the same way? The only on who can answer you prayer is God...Excellent write, Something to ponder about!.... Blessings ~ Debra
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/16/2022 8:29:00 PM
Nah, couldn't be me, Mr. 'What-Me-Worry!' ~ Alfred E.
Date: 1/16/2022 12:43:00 PM
An emotive write!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/16/2022 8:28:00 PM
I have moved on from e-moji writes now! ~ Mr. Emotive
Date: 1/16/2022 11:24:00 AM
Where there is life, there is hope. Got to say in the play. Excellent write!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/16/2022 8:04:00 PM
And where there's hope, exuberance blooms! Here's to Flowers and Fragrance, gw
Date: 1/16/2022 10:18:00 AM
Yes! And they are the sweet celestial magic, gw. Nice job.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/16/2022 7:57:00 PM
Just doing my job, as it were. Thanks, Milt. :)
Date: 1/16/2022 9:36:00 AM
Nice work Gershon. As you say 'love will repair'. Best wishes...Ron
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/16/2022 7:55:00 PM
I hope that love will repair, anyway. Thanks, Ron! ~ gw
Date: 1/16/2022 7:39:00 AM
Magically delicious! Oh, sorry wrong guy (lol). Magically Gersh'd... Have a great weekend., Gershon. ~CM
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/16/2022 7:51:00 PM
That's OK, Charlie. I'm at least as delicious as Alouicious. lol. Weekend Wonder, Gershon
Date: 1/16/2022 7:02:00 AM
Some magic, a muse, adrift to confuse! Yet, they will return so have no concern!! How's that? Happy Sunday GW!!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/16/2022 7:48:00 PM
That's a corker of a comment, Mike. Hope you've had a refreshing, relaxing weekend. Fidelity and Friendship, Gershon
Date: 1/16/2022 7:02:00 AM
I was indeed missing the magic of your compositions, was away from the splendid forum from a long time..
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/16/2022 7:41:00 PM
Happy to bring a little magic into your life, Silpika. Thank you for your generously kind words, Gershon
Date: 1/16/2022 12:43:00 AM
The magic is still on. Everything will be repaired and there is no need to despair, dear Gershon !
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/16/2022 7:39:00 PM
You're right. I just had to call 'Mr. Fix-It,' Valsa. Cheers, Gershon
Date: 1/15/2022 10:22:00 PM
Ahh my dear Gershon the magic is in your writings! Lovely piece!;)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/16/2022 7:37:00 PM
Brenda, what a treat to see your avatar, my darling. Hope you are well! Magic and Moonbeams, Gershon

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