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MISSING PERSON Saw him sitting on the curb weeping, pompous parades of the self righteous passing “his” children – in disgust. Eyes glistened through the tears hands trembling as if to control himself he rose – as if to speak…. was jostled by passersby, cursed at by glassed in motorists, mocked by the children on a passing school bus. Approaching the synagogue he was rebuffed by the rabbi, a relived experience. The churches, gilded doors locked, advertised Sunday services and a trip to Fox Woods Casino. Saw him sitting on the curb weeping accompanied by a stray dog that licked the wounds in his hands. John G. Lawless 10/26/2015

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Date: 10/27/2015 5:40:00 PM
Such plight so prevalent in today's world John, you say it well, you write it well..excellent poem.
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Date: 10/27/2015 9:35:00 AM
We are a very judgemental species- spouting forth personal 'truths' without the facts. A gritty piece, John, reminiscent of Luke 16:19-31. If everyone read it ,maybe there'd be a little more sympathy and tolerance. Fine work, mate. Regards, Viv
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Date: 10/27/2015 5:49:00 AM
Wow! Going straight to my favorites! This is powerful, so intense.
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John Lawless
Date: 10/27/2015 8:19:00 AM
thank you Monterey I appreciate your support and input.
Date: 10/26/2015 2:51:00 PM
John reading into this I see this man as Jesus. Well done and a 7+++
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Date: 10/27/2015 8:19:00 AM
Well Tim, it is a thinly disguised metaphor. I often hear people "preach" from behind locked doors. Thanks for the high mark
Date: 10/26/2015 2:38:00 PM
A powerful and lovely piece. This is so much interesting and well narrated......love always..........A.M.
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John Lawless
Date: 10/27/2015 8:17:00 AM
thank you for your kind comment Afolabi.
Date: 10/26/2015 12:35:00 PM
Very touching, John. Humans and dogs are both animals...which of the two are the most compassionate, which shows the most loyalty?
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John Lawless
Date: 10/27/2015 8:16:00 AM
Thanks for stopping by Lin and for taking the time to read and comment.
Date: 10/26/2015 10:13:00 AM
John, oh my this is so moving ...7
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John Lawless
Date: 10/27/2015 8:12:00 AM
thanks for the high mark BW
Date: 10/26/2015 9:29:00 AM
I feel as if I know this character by the end of your poem, showing me your write was expressive. My best wishes, Julia, :)
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John Lawless
Date: 10/27/2015 8:11:00 AM
Thanks Julia, appreciate your comment

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