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Missing My Friend Becca

I miss my friend Becca Even before she is gone She had thought this a safe place Free from conflict Judgment A place where all can freely express Where have all the past poets gone Do any of their words still echo in our minds Do they disappear into obscurity Who is left to sing their praises I will sing for Becca I will stand up for my friend I will stand beside my brother Freddie I will continue to breath their words Feel their hearts beat within my chest They matter They command my attention Their words and spirits have significance So I will miss my friend Becca I will shed a tear for a heart that is broken For good friends are hard to find She is worthy of being missed Today I say goodbye I wish for her to live in a land of smiles A place where dreams are realized She deserves no less She offered us her best The essence of a soul Expressed through precious words I miss her already Before she has gone Maybe it's not too late. Dedicated to Becca

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 6/21/2013 3:32:00 AM
Had another read...see you've made changes. Yes...I pay attention. My post way down there was based on some lines of the first one...beautiful this way as well.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/21/2013 7:11:00 AM
You are observant my dear. I sometimes go back later and make changes.
Date: 6/20/2013 7:12:00 AM
We have lost a good heart and wonderful writer, let's hope she returns soon. Lovely tribute here Rick, she certainly is missed. Take care, Richard
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/20/2013 7:37:00 AM
She has returned, thanks for caring
Date: 6/19/2013 1:45:00 PM
I was quite fond of her too. She would really love this, Rick.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/20/2013 7:37:00 AM
Hi Caleb see the above.
Date: 6/18/2013 10:47:00 PM
I thought she was a good poet and though I did not know her all that well, I really liked her. I sure hope she comes back, and that she will see this poem you wrote for her!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/19/2013 6:28:00 AM
I do as well, thanks for your positive comment.
Date: 6/18/2013 1:51:00 PM
What a lovely tribute to someone who is obviously very special. Well done
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/19/2013 6:28:00 AM
Thanks Monterey
Date: 6/17/2013 7:18:00 PM
Okay but dont let it happen again.Colleen
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/17/2013 8:53:00 PM
Can I please go to work tomorrow? *lol*
Date: 6/17/2013 5:08:00 PM
Richard; this is very touching. I don't know what happened to her - since I have not been around. She is a good person. Thanks for sharing.... Lucilla
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/17/2013 8:54:00 PM
Thanks Lucilla, welcome back
Date: 6/17/2013 12:41:00 PM
Your slipping,its almost noon and i dont see a new poem yet.Will be back soon to look.Have a good day.Colleen
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/17/2013 12:43:00 PM
At work today
Date: 6/17/2013 12:26:00 PM
I hope she comes back, i miss becca's good-natured disposition and quality pieces... wonderful testimonial!..:) huggs
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/17/2013 12:44:00 PM
She hasn't left
Date: 6/17/2013 11:31:00 AM
I'm so saddened to hear that Becca is or may be leaving? I love her poetry, her words of encouragement, her kindness. Please may it just be temporary if she does. : (
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Date: 6/17/2013 8:45:00 AM
Beautiful, Richard... It saddens me to see so many great poets leaving :(
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Date: 6/17/2013 8:15:00 AM
Great tribute to a great Becca . She must be a lucky friend. Well done on your heartfelt piece. AO
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/17/2013 8:17:00 AM
Thanks A.O
Date: 6/17/2013 8:03:00 AM
Very nice of you Richard....and so true...I miss her already too...but understand why she is leaving..
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/17/2013 8:07:00 AM
I hope you have not had to go through the same thing Donna.
Date: 6/17/2013 6:08:00 AM
Oh Richard.....yes yes yes yes to all you wrote. I'm so so hurt.....hope she changes her mind....:'( I'm crying with you.....
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/17/2013 7:36:00 AM
Thanks for adding your voice. Hugs Rick
Date: 6/17/2013 4:54:00 AM
- We will all miss her! - Nice poem to Becca, Richard! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/16/2013 9:36:00 PM
things are getting to out of control.A lady told me the other day,if you have a pulse,you have a purpose.so true.Love Colleen.P.S.1st
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/16/2013 10:17:00 PM
Thanks Coleen, I appreciate your visits today.

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