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This write was inspired by an actual event in South Africa where 13 people (including children) lost their lives when two planes crashed into a mountain on their way back from an air show a few weeks ago.. 

The joy of soaring being one with the clouds floating in and out between the blue and white closer to something that is indescribable unless you experience it for yourself that day the air show had all the elements of a dream come true we flew by so fast and yet thousands saw and were in awe happy faces of children and adults alike so we headed home we took to flight again everybody excited doing what we love to do... No one saw it coming a whole lot of miasma visibility almost none two planes no longer in the air lost communication the search is on - a day goes by, no word tragic reality becomes apparent both planes went down - A final salute at our memorial the missing man formation our final symbolic flight with our loved ones looking on... *Check about this poem section to see what inspired this write* 280820112205

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 11/9/2011 1:56:00 PM
takes my breath away....good work, Wilma! jimbo
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Date: 9/3/2011 4:16:00 PM
A fine tribute to those who went down in a tragic accidnet. I love watching the Snow Birds when they practice. It's so dangerous though. great job. God Bles, JB
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Date: 8/30/2011 10:03:00 AM
oh, my, what a sad story, wilma. I love how you told it though and was it for the flying contest. WEll crafted poem!
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Date: 8/30/2011 9:12:00 AM
Wilma-a sincere regret that this tragedy occured. These pilots were only trying to bring joy to the crowds and gave their loves for the love of flight! Thank u for posting the background on your poem. It is the first one I have "clicked" on and read thus far. I live in Dayton, Ohio, the home of the Wright B Flyer. A popular venue here and we had a tragic crash a month or so ago..hearts were aching then too. Gwendolen
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Date: 8/29/2011 6:42:00 AM
sad to know this Wilma.A touching write.Best wishes.
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Date: 8/28/2011 7:11:00 PM
an excellent verse Wilma as this just happened in Maryland air show not long ago luv and lives lost of brave pilots performing.. nice parallels as well ..good luck if for Debbie's contest on flying ..
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Date: 8/28/2011 5:09:00 PM
Oh my, Wilma. 13 lives lost in this crash? I am so sorry to hear of this. I love the tital you chose as it's so appropriate, especially when you reach the last verse and realize the air salute is missing a man (or in this case two planes). A heartwrenching write that begins so joyfully and then takes a dramatic twist. Deb will love it and I wish you success in her "Flying" contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/28/2011 5:07:00 PM
Tragic, but you gave them a fitting "final salute" with this well written poem Mrs. Wilma.
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Date: 8/28/2011 4:20:00 PM
Too many sad stories like this come across the news papers but your words brought life to it and a sence of reality.. Happy as laways to be reading your Poetry even the a sad write but a nice tribute.... love and hugs for you... Michael
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