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lost in summer breeze fall sunshine on leafless tree - diamond on river

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Paul Callus

Date: 4/17/2014 9:36:00 AM

a haiku where imagery takes centre stage; well done....full marks !! // paul

Donna Jones

Date: 4/6/2014 8:16:00 AM

Very visual...and lovely...congratulations

David Mohn
Date: 4/6/2014 1:14:00 PM

Thanks so much Donna :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/6/2014 6:24:00 AM

Congratulations on a fine win. I enjoyed the poem, david

David Mohn
Date: 4/6/2014 1:13:00 PM

Thank you Dr. Ram

Kim Merryman

Date: 4/5/2014 9:06:00 PM

Nice haiku, David! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

David Mohn
Date: 4/6/2014 1:06:00 AM

Thanks Kim,,,your hiaku 39 is wonderfull - love srabble also :)

David Mohn

Date: 4/5/2014 9:47:00 AM

Thank you so much SKAT...can't wait for that summer breeze myself :)

Skat A

Date: 4/4/2014 9:24:00 PM

Well Done David, the only thing missing from this haiku, is me enjoying the breeze and imagery. A perfect 10 haiku. congrats. SKAT

David Mohn
Date: 4/5/2014 9:47:00 AM

Thank you so much SKAT...can't wait for that summer breeze myself :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/4/2014 5:45:00 PM

DAVID, Congratulations, awesome VERSE! xox ~LINDA

Poet Destroyer A
Date: 4/4/2014 6:18:00 PM

thank you I'd like one from you...xoxooxoxoxo

David Mohn
Date: 4/4/2014 6:13:00 PM

Thanks Linda...love comments from you!

Aiyah Torres

Date: 4/4/2014 12:51:00 PM

nice poem ,David!!! ..well done for Andrea's contest... Congratulations!!!! :o))

David Mohn
Date: 4/4/2014 6:12:00 PM

Thank you so much AiyaH :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/4/2014 12:49:00 AM

awesome imagery. My only suggestion to you is not to use capitalization in haiku. Then this one would have scored higher. Congrats in my contest. I really liked this one.

David Mohn
Date: 4/4/2014 12:26:00 PM

Thanks Andrea...I did not know that about Haiku. I appreciate your comments as well

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 3/17/2014 8:03:00 AM

I can see the reflection of the sun on the river revealing a diamond ring.Lovely haiku : )

Paul Callus

Date: 3/16/2014 4:32:00 PM

Love this haiku; great imagery. // paul

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/16/2014 1:44:00 AM

Dave, wow,, love the sun reflecting in the river imagery... One of the best haiku I've read... LINDA

David Mohn
Date: 3/16/2014 10:41:00 AM

Thank you so much Linda. I really appreciate your comment :)?