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I hate that I can't see you or hear your gentle song Life is unfair to me How do I move on Can I take the steps without you Will my tears turn to smiles Can I run against the winds or crawl for miles and miles I hate it when I can't see you or hear your gentle song Please life care for me Then together we can move on

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/18/2012 7:16:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words... K.
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Date: 5/18/2012 7:14:00 PM
Lovely cadence and rhyming, Michelle... I like the way you repeat the first two lines into the third verse, and your middle verse accentuates the sadness you feel. Well done again! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 5/27/2011 1:02:00 PM
Such a heartfelt penning here. A good penning. Surely been there too.
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