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Miss you loads

I miss you loads…

My mum she was, kind and meek
In the wardrobe of my memories for her do I now seek
She is gone in the tomb
There she is carefree like in a mother’s womb
Devoted she remained as long as she was alive
Indebted to her sweet tender care does my whole being thrive
Her face was my solace
She was my life’s only Ace
Her shadow was my comfort
Crying on her shoulders was my only resort
Every morning she would wake me up like the cool morning breeze
In her lap all my fear would freeze
Hidden in a veil she used to work all day
From her God for us only she would pray
Where is she gone I wonder
My quest to see her again does not ever surrender
Like a beautiful flower was her pure face
My mind does not let it ever efface

Her ears were seats where all my secrets were poured
Bless her soul with peace Oh my Lord!

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  1. Date: 2/26/2013 2:52:00 PM
    Hey Shah, that was a great dedication to your mum, I love it...... xx

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 7:15:00 AM
    You are calling out to the Lord and therefore you can be assured to one day be reunited with your precious mom. This is a wonderful tribute to her.

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 3:24:00 AM
    This is a very sad poem.. but too sincere, as well!!! You have deeply affected me!! Great write.

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 4:40:00 PM
    wonderful dedication, with this excellent heartfelt poem...

    Date: 2/26/2013 12:43:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you harry it's really nice to receive such a comment from you
  1. Date: 2/22/2013 1:57:00 PM
    This is a great tribute to your loving Mother, Shah. I am sorry for your loss. Losing your Mum is nothing easy to deal with...I know. Take care. Annalise

    Date: 2/22/2013 8:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thnks Annalise's not easy that's very true..