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Miss Priscilla

Disheveled hair, wiry and gray an old lady hovered past my house each day. I ignored her when she passed by wondering what possessed her as I sighed then in my own focused diligence I slinked fast away, uncaring in my ignorance. Wasn't sure where she lived but wondered why in the world she seemed so encumbered. Then one day when a little cold set in I stepped outside my homey bin and there lay bird wings on my mat and slipped away some stray gray tabby cat. Then as I queried in my beleaguered mind that old lady waved, not surprised as to what I was to find. There along the shade of the door's edge just below the fully defined hedge lay the gathering of leaves and papers torn five kittens hiding unseen and newly born. The old lady grinned, scooped them up and smiled their mine she said as if they were her own child.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 1/21/2018 11:18:00 PM
Touching storyline with her adopted fur babies! Congrats on your win and best wishes!
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Date: 1/21/2018 8:02:00 PM
Congrats. Lovely spin on your winner of a poem. Thanks for entering my contest, DM.
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Date: 1/21/2018 6:32:00 PM
This winning poem is quite touching . Congrats to you.
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Date: 1/21/2018 3:14:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats DM:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/21/2018 10:58:00 AM
Well done DM, congratulations...
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Date: 1/21/2018 9:20:00 AM
Congratulations on a fine win.
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Date: 1/15/2018 3:25:00 PM
What a lovely poem and it shows we can be so busy going about our daily lives we can miss what is there right before our very eyes and Miss Priscila surprised us all at the end :-) hugs jan x
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