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Miss Christy Sambristy, a Little Tale

Miss Christy Sambristy had way too much hair! When you visited, hair was on every couch, and chair. It stretched all the way outside her blue and red door! If she tried cutting it, the hair just grew more and more! It was a diddly-dop puzzle; what on earth would she do! She tried running away but the hair caught in her shoe! She tried braiding it, but the braid spilled out onto the street. People had to jump up and down to avoid stepping on it with their feet. One day a man, name of Mr. H. Goodman Sinclaire said “I could make many coats with those reddish locks there” He was a coatmaker, turned scraps into coats he gave away to poor children absolutely, completely, in every way making their day! He called his friend, Moquilla R. Gorilla, and told his plan Can you call somebody to help us, if you please, my man? Moquilla thumped his chest 5 times, called gorillas far and near Miss Christy Sambristy will give us her hair, if we can find a shear. He read the Gorilla directions book for hair-cutting ways. It won't be easy to find this, it may take twenty days. So bring me some shark fins dipped in green ocean foam He spread it on every hair, ON EVERY LAST HAIR HE PUT green ocean foam! Miss Christy Sambristy is one happy girl Her hair is short enough now to curl Mr. H. Goodman Sinclaire is happy, too He decided to take all the poor children to the zoo! Did I mention it took three hundred and one fat gorillas to carry Miss Christy's hair home! March 31, 2023 for "Write A Sweet Fairy Tale for Children with a Happy Ending, etc. contest by B.J. Legros Kelley

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Date: 5/7/2023 4:13:00 PM
This is such a great poem for children, Dear Ann, I loved reading it! All the characters and character-names are hilarious - that’s what children enjoy! Congratulations on your win - you have created a Super Fairy-tale Poem!
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Date: 5/6/2023 9:28:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Ann! Thank you for entering your wonderful poem, and we also enjoyed the nice format! :)
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Date: 4/1/2023 10:04:00 AM
This is just such a cute tale Ann! I reread it just for the fun you weaved in. All best for the contest! :)
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Ann Peck
Date: 4/2/2023 10:38:00 AM
Thank you, Linda! I like to write nursery rhymes. Second childhood, it must be. :)
Date: 4/1/2023 8:53:00 AM
Ahhh!! A cute contest entry. Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing this red hair tale and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Ann Peck
Date: 4/2/2023 10:36:00 AM
Thanks, Sara. Yeah, I thought she needed red hair because it's so pretty. :)
Date: 3/31/2023 8:39:00 PM
very cute Ann. I can hear little girls giggling already:)
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Ann Peck
Date: 4/1/2023 8:34:00 AM
Thanks, Daniel! I think it shows the level of my mind. :)
Date: 3/31/2023 7:23:00 PM
What a hairy tale! loved it, Ann:)
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Ann Peck
Date: 4/1/2023 8:47:00 AM
Thanks so much, Joanna. I sent you a soup mail.
Date: 3/31/2023 6:42:00 PM
A well crafted tale, I enjoyed reading this poem/story from the first to the last verse. Good luck with the contest
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Ann Peck
Date: 4/1/2023 8:51:00 AM
Thank you, Lasaad! I like to write silly tales. :)

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