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Misfit

I should have left you in the past and not dragged you into my present. You should have stayed with memories of tank tops and Mary Quant make up, school discos and music by Mud. The long lazy summers preceding adulthood. When you arrived in 'now' you didn't belong, it seemed strange; didn't work somehow. You squinted to try and see me as I was and I you, but it jarred and mismatched - it didn't fit despite the trimming and the sanding to try and make it. So now you're gone again. Settled with the dusty photographs and nestling with teenage reflections. Back where you belong; in the attic of the past.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/16/2016 1:10:00 PM
real familiarity here (uncanny) and I don't mean plagiarism. smooth
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Date: 1/8/2010 8:19:00 AM
Excellent poetry Helen.Like that las line especially.Rgds Brian Thank you for your welcome comments and observations today.
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Date: 1/8/2010 3:45:00 AM
cool p i think a lot of people can relate to that expression.
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Date: 1/8/2010 3:08:00 AM
Back where you belong in the attic and in the past. Excellent write and an excellent ending
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