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Miscellaneous

Miscellaneous The escargots attack, They hide their guns On their spiral shells, Be careful, Giants. You think, you think, But you do nothing, It’s like watching A sailboat, set sail Heading for the moon. A felucca on the Nile, A white and round veil, The soothing under the sun Won the whole crew.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/11/2023 3:35:00 PM

very creative. I especially liked this part: It’s like watching A sailboat, set sail Heading for the moon.

Yann Rolland
Date: 9/13/2023 7:12:00 PM

thank you so much andrea

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 9/8/2023 7:44:00 AM

A fun and creative poem Yann. I enjoyed the journey with you. :)

Yann Rolland
Date: 9/13/2023 7:12:00 PM

thanks Linda, for the kind words, enjoyed

Bill Baker

Date: 9/6/2023 3:32:00 PM

I enjoyed your Poem, Yann. It was very interesting and informative. Everything looks better from the deck of a sailboat. Have a great day! Bill

Yann Rolland
Date: 9/7/2023 2:59:00 PM

Thank you very much Bill, this was just a vision i had ' the Nile)while looking at the sea, i would have liked seeing that from the deck of a sailboat, ( quote) enjoyed your comment

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 9/6/2023 10:14:00 AM

Snailing away sailing away they are a joy to watch thanks for the lovely poem Yann:)

Yann Rolland
Date: 9/7/2023 3:00:00 PM

Thank you Rose, for the kind comment, i am touched

Jerry Brotherton

Date: 9/6/2023 7:53:00 AM

I've always seen snails as tiny tanks. Such a fun poem my friend. Very creative.

Yann Rolland
Date: 9/7/2023 3:01:00 PM

you too, Jerry, smiles , thanks for the kind words

Speaks Volumes

Date: 9/5/2023 6:57:00 PM

This was such fun Yann ! I did not know snails hid their guns on their shells. It also was a surprise to see a sailboat heading for the moon. I thought a more fitting destination for a sailboat would be a star, but the moon ? Well fancy that ! The only one that didn't really challenge my thought waves was the felucca on the Nile, but I loved seeing it and the crew in the sun. SUCH FUN !

Yann Rolland
Date: 9/7/2023 3:02:00 PM

Thanks SV, fun is communicative , enjoyed your kind and great comment have a nice day