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Mirrors

As the water acts as a mirror To reflect the clouds and sky Let my attitude become a mirror Of my Father who lives on high As real men ride in chariots Being pulled by fiesty horses Being handled with only a bridle These men who control such forces Like God who with strength controls The whole universe with his right arm Guiding the sun, moon and stars To contain the earth's climate warm Let me turn over to God Things that I don't understand So my attitude can remain calm In so turbulent of a land

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/2/2010 8:27:00 AM
Nice, I like it.
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Date: 2/1/2010 3:06:00 PM
your poem is full of faith! Beautiful! -Susan Mills
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Date: 1/26/2010 2:25:00 PM
sara, just came here to post a contest entry and saw your last comment to me, which brought me tthis. What a great way to do a sonnet, incorporating a spiritual message with metaphor. Very nice! LUv, andrea
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Date: 1/26/2010 8:51:00 AM
a great and write sarah. Thank you for your comment
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Date: 1/26/2010 5:17:00 AM
great job, like a prayer, we all need the colming touch some times.
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Date: 1/25/2010 6:48:00 PM
Wonderful inspirational and poignant message of faith and trust in God ... beautiful write Sara... luv.. Linda-Marie
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Date: 1/25/2010 6:44:00 PM
very very good john h loving iii
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Date: 1/25/2010 2:21:00 PM
What a beautiful poem dear Sara,as so is your Heart..Charma
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Date: 1/25/2010 2:14:00 PM
Nice poem Sara, your faith shines in this piece >> James
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Date: 1/25/2010 1:35:00 PM
new poem posted
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Date: 1/25/2010 12:13:00 PM
Hope is always a precious thing. Thanks for the comments again Sara, because eventually what we hope for will be brought to us.<: -Always Lynette
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Date: 1/25/2010 8:44:00 AM
good morning Sara.Hope all is well.
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Date: 1/25/2010 5:20:00 AM
Sara this is so inspiring. We certainly need to hold on to our Faith even more when we don't understand things. We sure need to be mirrors in this day and age. Thanks for this poem. Robert
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Date: 1/25/2010 5:14:00 AM
Amen! To be a mirror of Him is what we all want......For your question on my poem Yes I have fibromyalgia. Thank you for your comments and keep up the beautiful writes
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Date: 1/25/2010 4:22:00 AM
A great one. a person who belief in God should have an attitude which acts like a mirror of our father in heaven!
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