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Mirror of Memories

People have always told me afore That everything happens for a reason But lately when I wake up at four I just don't know what is going on The blue-painted walls and the curtain Covered with home appurtenances O, and the sunlight, inside creeping Will I ever have second chances? A chance to remember yesteryear And the things that I always ask 'How?' For oblivion is what I do fear Can I have this second chance right now? Every night before I go to sleep I pray to God for a better day Remember memories that I keep And please do never drift them away.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 4/12/2017 8:50:00 PM
nicely done, I like going to the first poem written :)
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Date: 1/29/2016 3:39:00 AM
I just love it! just keep goin' Hans.... you wouldn't know it can also hit a thousand views.. thanks for your visit! :O) Keep your pen high! :))
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Date: 1/3/2016 2:25:00 PM
Hansteven, I enjoyed reading your first entry to poetry soup and winning in a contest with this wonderful write~ Caryl
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Date: 11/28/2015 2:53:00 PM
Hansteven,, Congratulations on your well-deserved win in Tammy's contest. <3 ForEver SKAT
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Hansteven Selfa
Date: 11/28/2015 11:39:00 PM
Thank you SKAT. :)
Date: 11/27/2015 8:52:00 AM
congrats on the win :) God bless
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Date: 11/27/2015 8:56:00 AM
Thank you. God bless you too :)
Date: 11/27/2015 7:50:00 AM
Congrats on your win Hansteven and thank you for entering into my contest.
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Date: 11/27/2015 9:19:00 AM
Thank You. I really enjoyed joining your contest. :)
Date: 11/20/2015 11:31:00 PM
Hi Hansteven, this is such an excellent first posting! I look forward to reading more of your work! Welcome to PoetrySoup and best wishes as you continue to churn out wonderful poetic pieces! Warmest regards and a score of 7! Good luck in the contest! Pandita
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Date: 11/21/2015 8:28:00 AM
Thank you very much!!! :)
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Hansteven Selfa
Date: 11/21/2015 8:28:00 AM
Thank you very much!!! :)
Date: 11/20/2015 9:42:00 PM
Hello Hansteven, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 11/20/2015 11:19:00 PM
Thank you my new friend. ??
Date: 11/20/2015 11:11:00 AM
Selfa., , , Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 11/20/2015 11:48:00 AM
Hello. I'm so happy to have a friend here in a Poetrysoup. Well, I am an Asian. I live in the Philippines. I am currently a 9th Grade student in a science high school here in our city. -Hansteven Selfa

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