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Mirror of Memories

Who is the old lady in the mirror looking at me ? That is not me, I am a young girl with flowing hair; I remember everything of my childhood yesterdays, But lately I am having some trouble with numbers. That is not me, I am a young girl with flowing hair, The lady in the mirror has white hair and wrinkles; But lately I am having some trouble with numbers, I cannot recall names so I just smile and then nod. The lady in the mirror has white hair and wrinkles, Someone put my purse in the freezer, I wonder why; I cannot recall names so I just smile and then nod, Want to talk but the words are swirling in my head. Someone put my purse in the freezer, I wonder why, I like thinking about the past, is it past or today; Want to talk but the words are swirling in my head, I have been looking for mother, oh wait, she is dead. That is not me, I am a young girl with flowing hair, I remember everything of my childhood yesterdays; That lady in the mirror has white hair and wrinkles, Who is that old lady in the mirror looking at me ? ______________________________ November 12, 2015 Written by Broken Wings For the contest, Mirror of Memories 'Alzheimers' Sponsor, Tammy Reams Second Place

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Date: 9/12/2017 5:53:00 PM
lovely write, Broken Wings, I guess we all feel that the image in the mirror isn't us, we still feel the youth in us. Time seems to steal our youth a little at a time... Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 11/28/2015 2:46:00 PM
Broken, Congratulations on your well-deserved win in Tammy's contest. <3 ForEver SKAT
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Constance La France
Date: 11/28/2015 3:06:00 PM
Thank you Skat
Date: 11/27/2015 8:25:00 AM
nice verse :) liked the flow..Congrats on the win.God bless
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Constance La France
Date: 11/27/2015 3:58:00 PM
Remnants thank you so much for visiting and for the congrats ~
Date: 11/26/2015 10:51:00 PM
Congrats on your 2nd place win Broken Wing! This has a lot of confusion and I loved it. It shows how bad this illness can be. Thank you for entering into my contest and Happy Thanksgiving.
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Constance La France
Date: 11/27/2015 4:00:00 PM
Tammy, thanks for an inspiring contest, and for my wonderful placement, I am so honored ~
Date: 11/16/2015 2:46:00 PM
I am a little teary-eyed, this is definitely a winner...good luck! :) -LU xxx
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Lu Loo
Date: 11/16/2015 6:56:00 PM
It is very terrible to watch or go through. So far I have been blessed to not have to watch a loved one go through such an awful situation. I really wanted to write for this contest but just couldn't really relate, and you wrote it perfectly... have a great night :)
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Constance La France
Date: 11/16/2015 4:51:00 PM
Laura, it is such a terrible and sad condition, and I see it all the time in my job as nurse at a long term care facility, so sad, thanks for visiting ~
Date: 11/14/2015 7:36:00 AM
You write with such authority. It hits the nail on the head. With the thought process that is running here, the emotions come through in the reader's mind. The repetition is making me think of the diminished brain with some short circuits. I really like your work very much (you must see that), and you are such a welcome presence. You have your own style and magnificence. You make the words fly. Perhaps your wings be broken, but your poetry has wings of its own that enable me to liftoff.
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Constance La France
Date: 11/15/2015 1:07:00 PM
Duke, thanks for the beautiful comment and compliments, so appreciated
Date: 11/13/2015 4:54:00 PM
because of the Beauty you possess....it will inevitably manifest....into that lady with wrinkles and white hair....and by that time, unfathomable amounts of wisdom will be there....another awesome write bw....;)
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Constance La France
Date: 11/13/2015 11:43:00 PM
Eric, thanks for the visit and the compliment ~
Date: 11/13/2015 3:10:00 PM
What a beautiful and excellent write my friend. When we rich some certain age a lot of memories would fade, the mirror cannot lie on you my lively friend. Most lovely poem I ever read today, I'm glad I dropped by to read you. This is a refreshing poem lol!. Brilliant write..............A.M.
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Constance La France
Date: 11/13/2015 4:35:00 PM
Thank you Afolabi for the visit and the nice comment ~
Date: 11/13/2015 11:34:00 AM
very effective write. good luck in the contest.
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Constance La France
Date: 11/13/2015 4:36:00 PM
Thank you Nathan for the visit and the nice comment, appreciate ~
Date: 11/13/2015 6:34:00 AM
I guess you have first hand experience with this in your job. Described perfectly. Someone I know has been going through this for years, including the purse in the freezer and looking for her dead mom. Very well done BW.
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Constance La France
Date: 11/13/2015 4:37:00 PM
James, yes working at a nursing home, I see people with alzheimers all the time, so that sure helped in writing this poem, thanks for the visit ~
Date: 11/12/2015 8:52:00 AM
beautiful work with emotional impact, constance... so well scribed!..huggs
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Constance La France
Date: 11/12/2015 9:07:00 AM
Thank you so much sweet nette for your visit and those nice words ~
Date: 11/12/2015 8:05:00 AM
WoW! BW, this is really good. You did an excellent job writing from the perspective of someone suffering Alzheimer's Disease. I think it should place high. Good luck in the contest:-)Alexis 7
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Constance La France
Date: 11/12/2015 9:08:00 AM
Oh Alexis thank you so much for the high praise, you are my forever support and I appreciate that so much ~

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