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Mirror Lake

The morning sun rose in silence, over the calm lake in red You were dressed in yellow, your hair long and brown, your eyes dark blue On a cloud covered day reflections faded, the sun set in black contest Sijo Strings...Summer Love

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Elaine George

Date: 7/4/2014 6:20:00 AM

Ah!!! Frederic, What a magniicant picture and feeling you have created with the magniicant Sijo. Many congrats on your win. bfn, Lainie

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/3/2014 10:06:00 PM

this is just so beautiful how you laid out the images from morn to night. LOVE it, and glad to finally see it here in the winners' circle. Congrats.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/3/2014 11:35:00 AM

Awesome win ...PD

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/3/2014 5:51:00 AM

A fine romantic expressions with great imagery, frederic. Congrats on the win

Frederic Parker
Date: 7/3/2014 9:23:00 AM

thank you Dr Ram for your kindness

Mohan Chutani

Date: 7/3/2014 2:10:00 AM

this is beautiful imagery in the lake mirror. Congrats Frederic. Mohan

Frederic Parker
Date: 7/3/2014 9:33:00 AM

thank you Mohan for your kindness

Casarah Nance

Date: 7/2/2014 5:56:00 PM

Great job on your win, a colorfully enhanced poem very nice :)

Frederic Parker
Date: 7/2/2014 6:20:00 PM

thank you Casarah for you kindness

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 7/2/2014 3:40:00 PM

Hi Frederic, congratulations on well-deserved great win! The imagery is magnificent! Kindest regards.

Frederic Parker
Date: 7/2/2014 6:21:00 PM

thank you Pandita for your kindness

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 7/2/2014 3:18:00 PM

I seems a dream & so describes the vision one feels they are in when you experience 'lust' at first sight - do try more of this form focusing on the little mind leaps mid-lines & the bigger one to line 3 you sure gave us 1 sensory sijo. Congrad's on your win. Light & love

Frederic Parker
Date: 7/2/2014 6:25:00 PM

thank you Debbie for this contest this sijo form is new to me so it will take me a while to truly grasp it