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Mirror

Pain is etched into your eyes And it haunts me deep into my core I wish so much to relieve you of your pain But I must first relieve my own But to do so I need to understand why I feel this way Why I hurt so much Like I’ve been gut punched Eyes flicker to me then away You can’t stand the sight of my scars The one’s I forced my hand to make But you have to live with them You have to see the ugly The pain The unwanted mistake standing in front of you You have to accept it but you can’t Because I am you And you are me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/13/2013 1:02:00 PM
Dear Rebecca, I am Wowed by this POETIC Portrait. YOUR Pen flows soft as a stream and rages like a river overflowing its banks Superb Quill. Thank-YOU for YOUR Gracious Comments. See YOU tomorrow With LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Liege...HG
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Date: 10/24/2012 10:49:00 AM
Wow this is just awesome...I don't know what else to say really!!! I'm faving it pronto!!!
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Date: 2/5/2012 1:35:00 PM
Wicked! I like the loathe in this poem! - David
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Date: 12/21/2011 5:24:00 PM
GOOSEBUMPIES EVERYWHERE! I really like the sound of this one, once again. Especially the last lines of awesomtasticalness! Always, Laura
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