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Miraculous Veroni

I don't believe in miracles, only you. A sigh of love could say it all. This is true, that ever since you looked at me I have known I would never feel the same, oh how I've grown. Never again will we mire in doubt. This time You and I will cast the shadows from our minds. This time I would learn from you all that I can, what it truly means to be your perfect man. How holy it feels to see behind your eyes. My love has touched your core, infinite in size. A universe of happiness now we bring in union that defies the need for this ring. My darling Veroni*, what have you become? Where once there were two, now all I see is one. *Vera + Yoni = Veroni

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Date: 4/1/2010 11:11:00 AM

Heartfelt poem. I like the creative way you combined the names. Nice job with this challenging form. The rhyme works well. Keep up the good writing! Thank you for your comment. Karen

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/14/2010 10:18:00 AM

Very creative work in this one. Keep your talent bringing us reads to entertain us . Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work.. Sara

Prince Freakasso

Date: 11/23/2009 9:14:00 AM

A lovely and touching poem Yoni. It rumbled me to the core. Yes I am a contemporary painter.You're very right when poetry and art collide,the senses get taken for a ride.Thank you for your lovely comments.God Bless,PRINCE.

Donna Golden

Date: 11/21/2009 12:48:00 PM

Yoni, this is a gorgeous tribute to your love. Wonderful, masterful sonnet! Hugs, Donna

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 11/10/2009 9:24:00 PM

How beautiful Yoni,,going to my Favs..im so happy for you my friend--Charma

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/8/2009 4:33:00 PM

Oh Youuuuu who...handsome soon to be husband? or has the wedding happened? YOU have soup mail. Light & Love

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 11/8/2009 4:46:00 AM

Yoni, I'm about to read this poem and I'm already chuckling. The title is great. I can't wait to find out what it means... It's deliciously sappy with mushiness right up to the lonely end. This is a GREAT write! Lovingly, Dane Ann Soupmail

Donna Golden

Date: 11/7/2009 6:44:00 PM

Syrupy sweet sonnet, surely! Loved it, though, Yoni! Best of luck with Vera! Hugs, Donna

John Freeman

Date: 11/6/2009 11:59:00 AM

Wishing you a happy day to enter into this oneness with your lady, Yoni! Sounds like from you tone in this poem that you know what it will take. I am sure you will bring a world of happiness to the marriage. God bless and the very best of wishes, in a great life. Sincerely, Love, Moses

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/6/2009 10:29:00 AM

I am so pleased to be reading all these outstanding poems today. I thank you for sharing yours with us today Yoni. Have a wonderful weekend and may you gain inspiration as well. Love, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/5/2009 9:40:00 AM

Not "sappy" at all, Yoni!! I love to hear your heart sing of your happiness as you prepare for your wedding day. Thank you for posting this uplifting write that will bring hope to many here who express sadness about their difficulties in relationships. It helps to know that things CAN work out! And "Veroni" is a very nice way to refer to your union. Wishing you a lifetime of happiness, dear friend! Much love, Carolyn