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Poetry convention is now convened attendance must be asked and seen Eve - Present Jan- Present AnneLise -Present Santa Claus- Present Shakespeare -Present Greek Ghost - Dead Jesus - Three days late Bach - Stringing things along Poets all dance and sing paint, draw and hold purse strings ah but some poets claim such glory Why then do they cheat upon Gods glory? All in favor clink our glasses red wine and friendships heaven exists in bistros of honesty

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Frankii Fame

Date: 3/19/2019 1:50:00 AM

i enjoyed your poem, but I'm going to respond different than I do normally... pleasetake no offense.... the last word snags me on a hook... Im left questioning why that was your last word? I apologize for questioning it, it is your poem... I just dont feel it smoothly... it puts me on a ledge like feeling which in turn is great if that were intentional,but not sure it is...

Agnes Krampe

Date: 3/15/2019 7:35:00 AM

That was a fun read, Arthur.

Jan Allison

Date: 3/15/2019 4:06:00 AM

Hey I really approve of the guest list minus Shakespeare I think he's dead boring lol:-) I hope you'd make a guest appearance too:-) seriously there are many super soupers I would love to meet, a convention will never happen but I have been so lucky to meet 3 lovely members and hope to meet more in the future:-) hugs Jan xx