Minee

MINEE Minee Minee Minee Minee What a beauty to behold With a smile so big and bold And a heart more precious than gold and big curious eyes that could make any warrior melt and fold Minee Minee Minee Minee Ooh what a beauty to behold.

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Ian Jones

Date: 8/10/2015 5:32:00 AM

There is that magical moment when first holding a child when the eyes open and focus. Pure magic, the euphoria of such moments is encapsulated in your verse, so tender, so excited and repeated again and again as they grow up. Smiles, Ian

Marion Mwangi
Date: 8/10/2015 8:02:00 AM

A child is Gods' precious gift to us and Minee is my neighbours child, she has this biig smile that's soo true pure and warm, and huge eyes that look up to me full of trust and they light up when she smiles. she is a joy to behold. lights up the place with her smile though tiny she be.