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Mine Eyes Lied

Looking out the kitchen window What is that mine eyes see Pale Pink Running Rosebud looking at me Let me look close at a miracle spied Oh! White bleached dead leaf How mine eyes have lied

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Billy Mcpherson Jr.

Date: 2/6/2011 2:50:00 PM

I loved this poem, beautiful imagery. Nice work. Thanks for your comment on "Heartbeat in the Night" by the way.

Gert W. Knop

Date: 1/23/2011 7:15:00 AM

So well written, Sara, enjoyed the read! And thank you for your ongoing kind comments...Have a great week!...Gert

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 1/23/2011 6:35:00 AM

Yes well now this is lovely for sure as well as a surprise within a prize. Wonderful job Sara. really like this one. Into my favs

Tiffany Mccall

Date: 1/22/2011 10:31:00 PM

thanks for the comment enjoyed your poem and wish to see more

John Freeman

Date: 1/21/2011 7:12:00 PM

Quite a take on your visual Sara. Beautiful Job, Sis. Agape, Moses

Joe Maverick

Date: 1/21/2011 11:49:00 AM

great piece sara i really like the way you have portrayed the fallability of human senses that can happen, and you have made a poem from that! so we find the bleached leaf has had a use indeed.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/21/2011 1:31:00 AM

the way you ended this was a blast for me, sara!! so original.. i like, like!!:) huggs, nette

Daver Austin

Date: 1/20/2011 1:27:00 PM

A fine memory though. Methinks you yearn for spring. Enjoyed this one. Love, Dave

Carole Cookie Arnold

Date: 1/20/2011 11:15:00 AM

Amazing portrayl of how imagery stirs a different response in every mind Creating descriptions of colors and emotions etc. At times giving us a vision of what is yet to birth even from the frail white leaf Love Cookie

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/20/2011 6:45:00 AM

thankxx Sara for your special comments today on my poetry Vast View... also just posted The Light u might enjoy my friend.. hope all is wonderful.. your time to shine luv..

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/19/2011 2:41:00 PM

Things are not always what they seem to be. My eyesight's not as good as it once was, Sara, and I probably would have thought it was a rosebud as well. Enjoyed the humor in your poem! Love, Carolyn

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 1/19/2011 2:21:00 PM

Makes me wish for spring also Sara. beautiful scene you painted...love Michael

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 1/19/2011 9:36:00 AM

Cute one...and nature's illusions can be so entertaining...if we have a great imagination. I enjoyed a smile when I read this one. Lovingly, Dane Ann

Harry Horsman

Date: 1/19/2011 7:19:00 AM

lovely to read such an interesting poem, great imagery aspect. Harry

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/19/2011 6:07:00 AM

We are all looking out to see if we can see a sign or two of Spring or flower ..Sara.. nicely penned my friend.. giving us a breath of fresh air on Soup today ..

Constance La France

Date: 1/19/2011 5:36:00 AM

This is just so wonderful, you captured a moment, well done, just beautiful and regarding your comment about the death of my Peanut cat, thanks so much, it was hard yesterday, I will tell you that and like you said of your dog telling you, she told me,"it was time" how we love our pets~~