Mindful Heart

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Written: May 17, 2024 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Artistic portrayal of life events as a diorama Fog hinders sight, and exertion leads to drama Seek ease, apathy, evade attentive scrutiny aging stems mindful swing, leading to mutiny Noxious prates fit sullen peer or weary mind facets of human life fetch fluid features blind time flows faring, etching hearts echoing gaze debate donning dated disdain diving graze Ear muffs muffle noise span in swath space. No opposition spark portrayed downcast chase. Foster love-prone awareness, not rigged favors. Grasping sky implies a whole heart-mind flavor. Arcane quartz artists sculpt clay in amort crafts ariose zeal to transcend wasteful calix daft heart relies on two atria: chemo-electro-static. capacious using cells that descry axons attic. Desultory reactions rather than brazen mindset Envious quest will reveal mindful heart reset It will be illusion to eviscerate frivolous notion. alternately, Inveigle grabbing a gaunt potion. heart caterwaul mindful love could never fade. wailing clangor appears dumb to mind, wade. No corpulent knot withstand swiftness of time. Adage," Time cures all scars" is sublime. Athirst ambitions would awaken aureate love. Soon, both of us will rise to celestial skies above. Amid effusive brain deluge to turn heart-wise Love endures eternally after lovers' demise.

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Duke Beaufort

Date: 5/20/2024 4:47:00 PM

SP, An artistic portrayal of life is very interesting. I've been reading this several times. The language is beautiful. I think you're suggesting we take things calmly and without too much of a fuss...but that feelings last.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/19/2024 9:38:00 AM

This is very alliterative. Is it for Tommy's contest, Sotto. Profound poetry with your unique imagery.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/18/2024 1:20:00 PM

I agree some people are bonded together forever where some are not even bonded together in life. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 5/18/2024 1:17:00 PM

Such a sweet conclusion. I love the words of the poem, of seeking ease, apathy, evade attentive scrutiny, the game of balance that is necessary in romance. Genius speaks throughout this verse.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/18/2024 5:45:00 AM

A mindful exploration of human emotions emanating from the power of heart that pulses and guides us. Your ending line speaks to its eternal gift.

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 5/18/2024 5:24:00 AM

Your poem is indeed captivating and engaging, dear Sotto. True, takes practice and desire to create a balance between the heart and brain amidst the complexities and challenges that are part of life.Your poem was thought-provoking, filled with your delightful imagery and astounding vocabulary. I liked: "Artistic portrayal of life events as a diorama...Fog hinders sight, and exertion leads to drama" Your poem was a soulful read for me. Wishing you a splendid day, your Texas poetess friend, Sara

Silent One

Date: 5/18/2024 5:08:00 AM

Your poem skillfully captures the intricacies of human experience, presenting them as a vivid diorama where fog and drama intertwine with ease and apathy. The imagery of aging and the fluidity of human emotions are portrayed with striking clarity, drawing the reader into a contemplative exploration of the heart and mind. The image of arcane quartz artists sculpting clay with the enduring power of love adds a layer of depth to the poem, highlighting the eternal nature of love amidst the transient nature of life.

Ink Empress

Date: 5/18/2024 12:17:00 AM

“Love endures eternally after lovers demise” what a line to end this very wise and deeply meaningful poem with dr sotto! I absolutely love the alliterations and your exquisite diction and how youve phrased so many lines in this very creative and soulful poem that depicts mindfulness and why it is needed to be kind etc! The opening lines especially were so captivating but like every poem of yours, this poem flows in such eloquence! Leaving an impression that lasts poetically in the most soulful manner! Sigh! Pleasure reading this! Sending you light always . Best wishes for the contest