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Mind Versus Brains

Once having it fun it crawls back from the shell, Making decisions a true living hell. 'For every action there is a reaction's, Always here to take away satisfaction. Had enough beer, right time to find a dame, One singing on stage seems to not know my name. Seems nice enough for adventure tonight, Her accent ain't fine, but the face looks alright. Now stop, hold on, take a breath and listen. It's time for a break and for some revision. Don't pick on her looks or the way that she talks, You're no perfect man and you have your own faults. Once having it fun it crawls back from the shell, Making decisions a true living hell. 'For every action there is a reaction's, Always here to take away satisfaction. I can't believe this witch brags with such pride. Talking like she has achieved something in life. Can't she comprehend I just want to get laid, Not how much for her trips her parents have paid. Assumptions, presumptions, insane expectations. Every idea you express is absurdly fallacious. Why take an issue with her self-esteem? Maybe to travel is her personal dream? Once having it fun it crawls back from the shell, Making decisions a true living hell. 'For every action there is a reaction's, Always here to take away satisfaction. Remember the darling I've been with and ditched, Because love made you unable to think? Now you're complaining about me being rude? You know what brain? I dislike your attitude. Now you're blaming me for once dropping the ball, Using it to justify every bad call. Who am I kidding, she's waving her keys, Cuddle her gently and do what you please.

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Date: 5/18/2017 10:46:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry soup:-) Great humour in your clever rhyme Simonas I think I have seen this type of guy in the nightclubs in my youth lol:-) labas vakaras (my later father was from Lithuania):-) hugs Jan xx
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