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Mind Reading

I have a crazy mind that dances to everything..
I read every angle of a word till it's staggering..

Sometimes I crawl behind sentences and hide..
When no one is around I peek and look inside..

There is a need to figure out what is really meant..
Sometimes the answers are not so transparent..

Good or bad I have the desire to explore..
At times I see three words when there is really four..

So this is me, a mind that reads with a poetic stare..
A flaw some may say ,but still a mind that cares..

Copyright © Michael J. Falotico

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  1. Date: 10/23/2012 7:50:00 PM
    This is a very graceful write, it carries its flow so elegantly! Love it

  1. Date: 9/3/2012 4:05:00 PM
    Love this poem, I find myself almost never looking at things as they are, life is not simple, what makes a person tick, why people say what they say or act a certain way, and at times, it is just simple, beautifull write, love debra

  1. Date: 8/12/2012 10:13:00 AM
    a brilliant mind too Michael luv to pen such a dynamic write touching us so deeply..u share and care in a poetic way to capture the reader and hypnotize with your awesome spell.. JG .. in spell mode..xoxo

  1. Date: 8/12/2012 7:12:00 AM
    Quite an interesting title for this one MJF. You shed light on things we sometimes just take as normal 'cause to us that is exactly what it is ;) love & hugs CTH

  1. Date: 8/12/2012 2:22:00 AM
    Michael just love the way you crafted this one, in and out front and back searching those words, thanks for your comment, yep a crack pot was right but thankfully she is off the soup now....take care buddy..Dave

  1. Date: 8/12/2012 12:20:00 AM
    I like how you used "mind reading" for the title of this. A very interesting perspective! thanks for your comment to my blasted tree, which is almost me. haha

  1. Date: 8/11/2012 6:59:00 PM
    shhh! ..xox~pd

  1. Date: 8/11/2012 2:08:00 PM
    A poet's mind works differently and it's a good difference I say, well done Michael, hugs vie

  1. Date: 8/11/2012 1:08:00 PM
    soupmail brother

  1. Date: 8/11/2012 12:28:00 PM
    Ah..there you are my brother:) You`ll always be a mind and soul that care,its truly a gem you`ve posted here Michael.Its your unique ability to reflect on life`s many challenges that keeps your pen write such gems like this.Keep that golden pen working! Have a great weekend ahead,its been a sunny and hot day over here today..Your brother,Arild

  1. Date: 8/11/2012 11:55:00 AM
    Soup mail :) cory

  1. Date: 8/11/2012 10:49:00 AM
    This was a wonderful write... Nice job.. I am back now Thanks for stopping. A friend of mine you'll always be. cory

  1. Date: 8/11/2012 10:23:00 AM
    Great rhythm, flow and topic..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by..Breakfast was tasty this morn..Sara

  1. Date: 8/11/2012 9:04:00 AM
    nice write Michael glad you still care about things still waiting for your poem, I take it you forgot xx

  1. Date: 8/11/2012 7:33:00 AM
    It is certainly not a flaw my friend! There is no flaw in poetic measures, you can use it to magnify the deeper meaning, this inside voice, what is truly meant by what might have been said, written, or displayed! I truly love this in depth message Michael! Great Work!!

    Falotico Avatar Michael J. Falotico
    Date: 8/11/2012 8:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank your Russell, your comments are always too kind... MJF