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Mind of a Serial Killer Ii

I see her as she starts to approach toward me carrying roses for her special day her mind in an hypnosis state not aware this is the closest I've been to her as I start to forbear from her I have watched her for days and days have become weeks she is not meek but 'oh' so, so sweet my heart beats a thousand beats in the anticipation to come with my new techniques just for her that will occur The echoes in my mind talk to me as I get to close to her and warns me not to impose or I may become exposed I will silently watch her for now and I give her my vow you are mine my sweet divine! Do you feel me? Do you want me? T Reams

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Shadow Hamilton

Date: 7/24/2015 4:56:00 PM

fascinating Tammy love this series hugs 7

Tammy Reams
Date: 7/24/2015 5:20:00 PM

Thanks again!

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 4/28/2015 12:47:00 AM

Oooooh, his fixation on her is quite intriguing. A very interesting character you've developed. Always, Laura

Tammy Reams
Date: 7/24/2015 5:22:00 PM

Thank you Laura for the nice comment. Sorry this is late I have been away for awhile.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/2/2015 9:11:00 AM

On to part three!

Tammy Reams
Date: 4/2/2015 10:56:00 AM

Thanks! Keep going.

Nicole Ussery

Date: 3/25/2015 8:39:00 AM

That was very interesting, when I write short stories it is kind of like that. But in a good way you are talented. Check out some of my poems too, you might enjoy them.

Tammy Reams
Date: 3/25/2015 1:46:00 PM

Thank you for your comment Nicole. I will check out some of your writes. Make sure to read part 3 of this. It's getting deeper.

Allison Carver

Date: 2/24/2015 5:28:00 PM

Very, very, interesting.

Tammy Reams
Date: 2/25/2015 7:56:00 AM

Thank you for your interest. This is part two. You can read the first one I did with the same title. I think I'm going to make this a continued poem. Thank you again for your comment.

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 2/18/2015 10:03:00 AM

Gah this is dramatic and dark in a spine tingling way!!! Sadistic perhaps? Just poetry. Pls do review my latest poem too.

Tammy Reams
Date: 2/18/2015 4:08:00 PM

Thank you Kamoonpuri for your comment. This is part 2 of a possible continued poem. I will check out you poems next. Part 3 of a Serial Killer will be a little more intense.