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Mind Mapping

My heartbeat echoes a motionless metronome With only an offshore wind to bring it back home Inside my mind the weight of my thoughts drone At once setting the mood the moment the tone Tracing every wall branding every surface with marks This is no longer the sheltered haven where my mind parks I try recall what sent us out of orbit & led us astray Dunno however this is no longer a place of innocent play I search for tracks paths previous passages routes to take The intricate webs stilts steps the uphill journey I make All the while the library vault is empty overdue & archived This all had happened long before by the time I had arrived And all in the silence standing dizzy & still steadily spinning I asked implored and prayed fervently to karma destiny & fate To stop the cycle the story & take me right back to the beginning At once right now hurry hasten & do this before it is to late

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Date: 7/13/2014 9:01:00 AM
This is very good, the melding of body mind and soul and the forces beyond that connect us to God. I enjoyed your use of metophor.
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