Mind Games

She liked the sound of music Soft and sultry Sometimes dark But mostly in mind She liked turning him on Watching him smile Undressing her slowly But mostly in mind She liked the sound of music Soft and sultry Sometimes dark But mostly in mind She liked the way he teased her Moving slowly to her love zone Tantalising her soul But only in mind She liked the sound of music Soft and sultry Sometimes dark But mostly in mind She liked the build up The tension The screaming, the release of pleasure But only in mind.

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Di11y Da11y

Date: 6/12/2023 10:26:00 PM

I don't follow many people, so keep seeing this and thinking of the music (I don't think this makes me any weirder than anything else I've said?!) My next suggestion is Creep by Radiohead. Then if that's too heavy (how could it be?) Then perhaps Nothing Else Matters by Metallica.

Paul Bell
Date: 6/13/2023 2:20:00 AM

Two of my favourite bands, that'll do for her mind. lol

Nancy Kaufman

Date: 6/12/2023 12:46:00 PM

I guess she can just keep having those dreams, huh? LOL

Paul Bell
Date: 6/13/2023 2:20:00 AM

Yeah, dreaming is still free.

Suzette Richards

Date: 6/11/2023 2:58:00 AM

As Barry White once said during an interview : "I've contributed to the population explosion in a big way." ... Or words to that effect.

Suzette Richards
Date: 6/11/2023 5:15:00 AM

hahaha ....

Di11y Da11y
Date: 6/11/2023 3:29:00 AM

Haha Suzette - I may never have had children if Barry was the only soundtrack :D

Di11y Da11y

Date: 6/10/2023 3:08:00 PM

It's a good poem, tricky to comment on. I'm wondering if she's more into Korn or Julie Andrews though? :) (I have possibly ruined the poem, I apologise...)

Paul Bell
Date: 6/11/2023 2:11:00 AM

Think Korn would scare her rigid and Julie would be too saintly. She's in-between the theory and the practice.