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Minced Words

How can I do without mincing words I have to deal with you To delay dimple in dews To deposit my desires in your milieu To bring out your spectrum of hues And then only I can present you before the connoisseurs Who wait for elegance and euphony Who make intense scrutiny Of assonance and metaphors How come then I will avoid mincing This plain straight jacket clichéd word Worn out by everyday use through aeon Hence the glistening knife of restless neurons Hence the laser to hone the shape and size Hence the file to smoothen the rough edges This is the art of all the sages in millions of pages You pick anyone from Shakespeare to Sylvia Mincing of words all took as the principia Instead of just black and white Isn’t it better to have the bougainvillea ______________________________________________ June 24, 2016 For Minced Words – Poetry Contest Sponsor: John lawless

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Date: 9/27/2016 9:55:00 PM
You are amazing I thing, love your work.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 9/28/2016 12:48:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 8/7/2016 9:28:00 AM
Hi Probir - Well then my poetry maestro - so many styles to chose from in your writings and your clever way with words - you are a "Scholar" Sir - a pleasure I shall have getting to read them all . . . : )
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Probir Gupta
Date: 8/7/2016 10:59:00 AM
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Date: 6/29/2016 3:32:00 AM
Congrats Probir, for your top placement in the contest!! ;-)
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Probir Gupta
Date: 6/29/2016 7:10:00 AM
Top? Anyway, Thank you so much ...
Date: 6/28/2016 8:53:00 AM
Wonderful take on the theme, Probir. Congrats on your placement in the contest.~karam~
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Probir Gupta
Date: 6/28/2016 7:32:00 PM
Thank you ~karam~ ...
Date: 6/27/2016 9:44:00 AM
A 7 for this winning poem, Probir! Your mention of worn-out expressions made me think of my efforts NOT to use them. Janice
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Probir Gupta
Date: 6/27/2016 12:25:00 PM
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Date: 6/27/2016 8:57:00 AM
"this plain straight jacket cliched word". You had me visualizing the diamond cutter figuring the multiple facets of each angle of each cut. Thanks for participating in the contest.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 6/27/2016 12:26:00 PM
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Date: 6/27/2016 8:39:00 AM
Probir, great mincing of words congratulations on your win!!!!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 6/27/2016 12:28:00 PM
Thank you Eve ...
Date: 6/26/2016 6:38:00 AM
"the glistening knife of restless neurons" is my favorite part.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 6/26/2016 9:15:00 AM
Thank you ... your comment inspires me to raise another poem right now, but am otherwise engaged, ... will do it as soon as I get time ... the bird of neurons are pecking at my time ...
Date: 6/25/2016 5:14:00 AM
Good luck! Great choice of words!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 6/25/2016 7:22:00 AM
Thank you Sunita ...
Date: 6/24/2016 9:29:00 AM
Probir, great way to do the theme of minced words a 7 good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve
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Probir Gupta
Date: 6/25/2016 7:23:00 AM
Thank you so much Eve ...
Date: 6/24/2016 6:21:00 AM
great imagery and humour Probir good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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