Million Dollar View

Earth's grace From space 15 Aug 2015 Footle Poetry Contest

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M. Shahid H. Chouhdry

Date: 8/30/2014 8:45:00 AM

Well written.Enjoyed the plot and SHORT Scheme.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/17/2014 11:56:00 AM

I see you changed it. I wonder if you did it too late since the contest has been judged now. I really like it with the change now.

David Mohn
Date: 8/17/2014 12:13:00 PM

Thanks...looks like I was too late though she had a pretty small number of winners so I may not have made the cut regardless..thanks for the help and congrats on your entry...very cute

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/16/2014 9:40:00 PM

David this is very nice. but your second syllable of each line has to rhyme together!

David Mohn
Date: 8/17/2014 8:36:00 AM

Thanks for the info Andrea & happy 39th anniversary :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/16/2014 7:34:00 AM

Beautiful thought, david

Casarah Nance

Date: 8/15/2014 4:38:00 PM

That would be an awesome sight to see! :)

Jan Allison

Date: 8/15/2014 1:18:00 PM

excellent footle - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xxx