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For Ink Empress's Fibonacci poetry contest

A Fibonacci is a type of poem that is based on the Fibonacci sequence that is used in mathematics. The number of syllables in each line of the poem corresponds to the number in the sequence. The number of syllables in any one line will equal the total syllables used in the two preceding lines.

These types of poems are known as Fibonacci poems because they use the sequence that was made famous by the 12th Century mathematician Fibonacci. However, there are examples of this type of poetry that go back much further than this and are written in Sanskrit. It is believed that it was a Sanskrit grammarian named Pingala who was the first person to discover this sequence as far back as 500 BC. 

The number of syllables in each line must equal the sum of the syllables in the two previous lines. So, start with 0 and 1, add them together to get your next number, which is also 1, 2 comes next, then add 2 and 1 to get 3, and so on. Fibonnaci: 0, 1, 1, 2, 3, 5, 8, 13, 21... Poetry: 1 syllable, 1 syllable, 2 syllables, 3 syllables, 5 syllables, 8 syllables, 13 syllables, 21 syllables...

 

A mute poet wonders why seeds from soulful words fail to blossom his lotus voice. A silent knight jousting against his militant muse, whose armour is a sword of metaphors piercing verses to bleed through poetic forms.

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Date: 1/28/2024 7:27:00 AM
Excellent Fibonacci! Congratulations
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Date: 1/27/2024 5:17:00 AM
Unique and profound take, i absolutely love your wordplay and the way youv delivered this in such an intriguing manner, always love a poem that makes me think deep and feel so much and i love how you’ve written “ A silent knight jousting against his militant muse, whose armour is a sword of metaphors” brilliant and soul hitting! How you’ve phrased that too is so clever! Congratulations on your win! Well deserved, thank you for sharing this
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Date: 1/19/2024 12:03:00 AM
Lovely as can be. I wrote one too but I have to remember where I put it so I can type it up.
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Date: 1/18/2024 6:59:00 AM
Militant muse--quite original, my friend. I like your word arrangement that leads to a wonderful ending line.
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Date: 1/18/2024 2:34:00 AM
Brilliant write with a perfect number per line.
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Date: 1/17/2024 7:00:00 PM
A fascinating read. She is undoubtedly a dark enigma, defying you to hunt her down in daylight, SO. I praise your courage to do this, and you did it successfully. You have a powerful tone, that you apply to express an absence of one. Very talented, really!
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Date: 1/17/2024 6:49:00 PM
A very interesting read! Those first 4 lines pull us in! Hugs ~ Kim
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Date: 1/17/2024 4:02:00 PM
She is surely a dark mystery, daring you to pin her down in the light.
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Date: 1/17/2024 3:42:00 PM
the words 'seeds from soulful words fail to blossom'--how often I feel that way whether writing poetry or stories. The comparison to a silent knight jousting against his muse was brilliant. Am faving...best wishes with the contest, Sara
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Date: 1/17/2024 2:58:00 PM
You seem inspired to write this one. I applaud your willingness to do this, which you did well. You do have a potent voice, which you use to describe a lack of one. Very artistic indeed!
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Date: 1/17/2024 2:36:00 PM
Big Bravo!
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Date: 1/17/2024 1:38:00 PM
not met this style before . SO very interesting hugs Shadow
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Date: 1/17/2024 12:55:00 PM
now thats quite a fencing dear poet, :)
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Date: 1/17/2024 12:48:00 PM
A mute poet. LOL. I hope he/she gets their voice back. I enjoyed reading this contest entry. It reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Thanks for sharing it and for your visit. Sara K
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Date: 1/17/2024 11:47:00 AM
Sure winner. Love it. God bless you always, SO. Love, Gina
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Date: 1/17/2024 11:08:00 AM
Better a more "militant" muse than a more lethargic one...as mine has become of late. A very interesting form, S O, and BOL in the contest.
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Date: 1/17/2024 10:54:00 AM
Well done with this form, SO. Soulful write! Good luck in the contest, I think Ink will like this!
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