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Migration of the Monarchs

drowsy cricket songs call orange-black wings to rest on yellow ragweed hunting with broomsticks bent coat hangers and cheesecloth we chase summer dreams

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 11/21/2016 7:35:00 PM
Wonderful imagery, Tim. Congratulations on your podium win! Sandra
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Date: 11/21/2016 2:12:00 PM
What a magnificent image you have created with this incredible Senryu, Tim. Number one in my book. Congrats. Elaine
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Date: 11/21/2016 7:49:00 AM
Tim, congrats on your win with this lovely piece! Janice
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Date: 11/21/2016 7:28:00 AM
Congrats on this lovely one, Tim!
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Date: 11/20/2016 11:18:00 PM
Such beautiful imagery! Congrats on the win, Tim!
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Date: 8/20/2015 11:33:00 PM
Precise and beautiful Tim! loved these haikus much, congrats on big win!
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Date: 8/19/2015 9:25:00 AM
Great imagery, congrats.
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Date: 8/18/2015 9:14:00 AM
Tim, you are the monarch of haiku with this beautiful, winning piece! Not only is it cleverly written, but the imagery is awesome! Congratulations and a 7 on your great win! Pandita
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Date: 8/18/2015 8:53:00 AM
you've caught it - congrats on your win
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Date: 8/18/2015 12:19:00 AM
Hi Tim, loving and enjoying this one again.... Congratulations on your butterfly win. SKAT love
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Date: 5/26/2015 3:12:00 PM
They haiku, is a for I'm studying right now. Love the line chasing autumn dreams. SKAT
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Date: 10/13/2014 11:47:00 AM
I love haiku. Love these gems too. Congrats on the selection. daver
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Date: 8/30/2012 5:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Russell's "Autumn Fall Colors" contest Tim. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/26/2012 7:33:00 PM
Nice imagery, Tim. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 8/26/2012 7:43:00 AM
congrats Tim on a glorious win for this colorful entry luv.. hope the Saints are great this year .. but gotta cheer for my GMEN..
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Date: 8/24/2012 5:43:00 PM
Fall right into Halloween, fun. COngratulations on your win.
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Date: 9/18/2009 7:34:00 PM
Creative use of imagery for an interesting view. I like the uplifting way you ended this poem. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 9/18/2009 4:46:00 PM
Splendid imagery Tim, nice work...Raul
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Date: 9/18/2009 4:39:00 PM
just wonderful Tim! Such a fresh and unique Fall view! Light & Love
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Date: 9/18/2009 4:05:00 PM
this is a great visual to a summer time activity ....loved it! "chasing summer dreams" >>>>>>>>>>wheew....nice!
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Date: 9/18/2009 3:48:00 PM
Nicely done double Haiku. That ragweed is out there this year really makes some people sick. Keep writing. Sara
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