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Wind blows bitter cold, The loud, honking geese fly south In chevron pattern. Pointing to warmer climate..... Their annual vacation.

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Date: 9/24/2010 1:15:00 PM
enjoyed reading today...well written!
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Date: 9/24/2010 8:26:00 AM
Wonderful sight the geese in formation, and a beautiful species of bird. Nice one Francine >> James
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Date: 9/24/2010 4:15:00 AM
You know, Francine, when I lived in NJ I would see large groups of geese flying south. But in all my years in Florida, I have not seen them arrive here. Wonder exactly where they head. Really enjoyed your tanka, especially the line about the "Chevron pattern." Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/23/2010 10:21:00 PM
Another one very nice. Tanka are great, aren't they?? LUv, Andrea
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