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MIGRANT BOAT

it casts off from the quay to cross short stretch of sea heading for foreign shore with migrants from afar they leave place of despair to start new life but where the boat is sitting low the swell begins to grow and then the sea spills in passengers panicking beneath the cold moonlight the boat rolls left and right all now are on the brink as boat begins to sink soon all are in the sea but crew quickly swim free life jackets they have on but passengers have none and never reach the shore then gone for evermore

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Brian Sambourne

Date: 8/14/2023 2:06:00 PM

You've taken the tragic headlines of migrants in peril to give news a poetic force of lives endangered. Sadly there isn't more compassion for people fleeing persecution. A fine write, with a conscience. Best wishes, Brian

Tony Hargreaves
Date: 8/17/2023 11:27:00 AM

Many thanks Brian. These are mostly desperate people trying to escape persecution. On the news today I learn of more being lost at sea on overloaded inflatables. These criminals that run the game must be the lowest form of life. I worry. What can we do? Take care. Tony.

Gary Radice

Date: 6/30/2023 12:17:00 AM

One of the greatest human tragedies of our time and one that politicians and people in power dont seem capable of putting right anytime soon. How many more lives will be lost? Your poem tackles the emotive subject very well and doesn't pull any punches. Cheers - Gary

Tony Hargreaves
Date: 7/4/2023 8:59:00 AM

Thanks Gary. Many spend their life savings (and more) for a chance to escape a desperate life. Their lives now gone. Their savings now in the pockets of ruthless people who are making vast profits. Tony

Rev. Catherine Cassell

Date: 6/29/2023 11:25:00 AM

So tragic and tue. What a great expression of your thougts.

Tony Hargreaves
Date: 7/4/2023 9:15:00 AM

Many thanks Catherine. These boat people are being 'ripped off' by criminals who care for nothing but their own gain. And there are no safety standards - not even life jackets for the 'victims'. Take care. Tony.