Midnights

Believe me when I say I have never been this far. I fell in love with midnights, Counting every star. With you by my side, Our fingers interlocked, We owned the night Under a clock forever stopped. We drink coffee And tell each other our dreams. We are raw with ourselves, Poking at the seams. Believe me when I say I have never been this far. I fell in love with midnights, And you with all my heart.

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Skat A

Date: 7/21/2016 3:03:00 PM

olivia husby, well penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. *SKAT*

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/30/2016 5:20:00 PM

Olivia, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@