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Midnight Run

Rising while others are falling fast asleep Should I go? Now that ain't even a question 'cause baby girl gotta eat And so does my wife, and I Gotta go! Yes, gotta make that run just so we can get by Dreams! Sweet dreams of the future both near and far Reaching earnestly yet they're like a distant fading star Running to punch someone else's clock, now this ain't ever made no man rich I know it but I haven't found it, yes, that good 'ol niche Running, running, running but to where? Just trying to stay focused on that distant star as I persevere SLOW DOWN! I say slow down 'cause what's gon' be, gon' be! Every time I say this, I quickly remember that the car note is a month behind and the cupboards are empty Running! Running into the night and days Baby needs a new pair of shoes and still no pay raise Lord! Being caught in this whirlwind makes me wanna holla' Running, just running to make that mighty dollar God knows I've been struggling to make these old ends meet. I've moved slow and fast Don't know Lord, just don't know how long my energy gon' last

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Date: 12/5/2017 5:53:00 PM
yes this is a poem that people can relate to. have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 11/25/2017 11:41:00 AM
A poem that most people can relate with, purple, black and blue...
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Date: 11/20/2017 8:56:00 AM
Cool black earth truth, Stewart! Your poetry spin ghetto gold, bruh. Love the allusions and metaphors. Great lines throughout, esp ... running to punch someone else's clock. The ending is grand encore truth. Another PSoup house winner this poem be. Pulsar bright poetry. Love and peace forever.
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Stewart Watkins
Date: 11/24/2017 10:16:00 AM
Thanks for the feedback, Freddie! This is one of my favorites! I composed this after getting heavy doses of Miles - Freddie Freeloader. Lol
Date: 11/5/2017 6:15:00 PM
Great poem Stewart! I enjoyed it very much.
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Stewart Watkins
Date: 11/5/2017 6:16:00 PM
Thank you, P.M.

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