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Midnight Moon

Midnight moon watching over the grave yard, as a lonely racoon searches for a late night snack. Written 5-14-11

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Anne Rutherford

Date: 5/25/2011 3:26:00 AM

Sad to think of the racoon being the only living thing in the grave yard. Good write. Anne

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/23/2011 11:38:00 PM

James, this could maybe be haiku or tanka if you played with the lines a bit. It has that "feel" to it. Great atmosphere poem.

Neha Sharma

Date: 5/23/2011 5:18:00 AM

simply beautiful....james

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/22/2011 12:50:00 PM

You have worded beautiful images for a visual, James

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/22/2011 12:34:00 PM

eerie and intriguing lines with a lovely title and compelling imagery James.. very imaginative poetry luv..

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/22/2011 12:30:00 PM

I can see the scene..Very creative work..Thanks for stopping by and letting me know that I placed in a contest..I will have to get up in the middle of the night and see if I can see those armadillos by moonlight and write one about them..Sara

Matt Hunt

Date: 5/20/2011 4:48:00 PM

Gave me goose bumps:) Great job! R.M.

Jack Horne

Date: 5/20/2011 1:03:00 PM

I really love the spooky feel of this one, James.