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Midnight Hour

Midnight in my window, shines gold in the room With a white-washed patina, to soften the gloom Sounds of the rafters, speak like old friends And the paleness of moonlight is brought by the wind Clocks ticking onward, not missing a beat will chime every hour, remind and repeat I sit in the dark, and hear every creak And the heart of a house has fallen asleep. I fondle the arms, of a chair from the past Like something remembered, with moments to last My chair is a remnant from yesterday's child Restored and now cherished to bring me a smile It keeps me in rhythm, this midnight in June I think how she rocked me, to lullabye tunes She sat in the dark, under a soft velvet moon With me in her arms, I can picture the room I can't quite recall, but the moment is charmed I was held to her breast in soft velvet arms The rocking of rails, against the hardness of floor Returns all my thoughts, to reflect on once more The rhythm the same....there is gold on the grain There is gold from the past and gold on the glass The moon watched time pass, through an old window pane ______________________________ 6/13/14 For The Contest "Midnight Hour" sponsored by Kelly Deschler

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Date: 2/16/2015 1:23:00 AM
Carrie, Congratulations in Kelly D's contest. Always ~LINDA
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Date: 2/15/2015 10:08:00 PM
a wonderful win, SKAT
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Date: 2/9/2015 10:39:00 PM
Congratulations on this beautiful description of the sounds and color of the room and the rocking chair. 7
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Date: 2/7/2015 2:28:00 PM
A delight to read Carrie - many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/7/2015 12:36:00 PM
This wonderful poem has been lingering in my memory every since my "Midnight Hour" contest, and I'm sure it will stay there for a long, long time. Congrats on your first place win and thank you for participating, Carrie!
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Date: 6/29/2014 10:49:00 PM
Dear Carrie, I knew this amazing poem would place high. Congrats on your first-place win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/29/2014 6:36:00 PM
Back again to congratulate you on your win, woohoo you rock!
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Date: 6/29/2014 6:07:00 PM
Carrie, the idea of listening to the old house, room, and rocking chair and drifting back in memory with the midnight moon as emcee. Congrats, well deserved.
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Date: 6/29/2014 6:01:00 PM
Wow! This was a beautiful recalling of the memories of a lifetime that took place in this chair. I loved the nostalgic feel of this wonderful poem, Carrie! Great rhyme and word flow in this, as well. Congratulations on your first place win! Well deserved!
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Date: 6/22/2014 2:36:00 PM
Carrie, so lovely. I love reading your work; every one creates a spell. I think we will see this again at the top of a list. Thanks for your visit.
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Date: 6/18/2014 3:39:00 PM
wow, this is utterly beautiful, Carrie. I would place it way up at the top of that winners' list!!
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Date: 6/15/2014 8:21:00 AM
I agree with Carolyn's comments below - absolutely beautiful, my friend
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Date: 6/14/2014 2:31:00 PM
Dear Carrie, This is the best poem I've read so far for the contest. Only you can create images that are meaningful to a message in this manner. Those "soft, velvet hands" must have been your mother's or grandmother's. Love the way the poem creates such a serene mood. Best wishes in Kelly's challenge. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/13/2014 9:13:00 PM
Whoa, Wonderful. I bought a wooden rocking chair when my baby was born, the memories of rocking her will always be cherished and it seems yours are as well. What a great poem, big smiles :)
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