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Midnight Breeze

The midnight breeze strokes my face Gently rocks my net cradle Under the stars and moon beams Whispering a lullaby Jack Horne, 29th August, for Nette’s Hammock of Sky Tanaga contest

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/7/2012 10:47:00 AM

An appreciative thank you for your kind comments on my poetry Jack. The best to you in the contest. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/3/2012 9:51:00 AM

Just returning to tell you how truly beautiful this is.

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/1/2012 5:05:00 AM

wonderful verse, jack, such peace and harmony 'únder the stars and moon beams' enjoyed.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/30/2012 4:40:00 PM

Ahh!!I really like this one..Reads like a winner in Nette's contest..I am glad that I got by here to read this one..Thanks for stopping by..The fire ant bites and holds on then injects venom with its stinger..It goes around in a circle stinging..They usually get on a person or animal in numbers..In a person, they all get on then start to bite at one time..It is very painful for it burns like fire then one gets intense itching..Sara

Terry O'Leary

Date: 8/30/2012 3:27:00 PM

Very nice... Good luck with this great entry! Terry

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/30/2012 2:54:00 PM

beautiful. OH, man, I gotta get hopping on this one!!

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/30/2012 1:47:00 PM

Wow, this might be my favorite one that I've read for this contest! I think Nette will love this poem! This is a really awesome write my friend! Great Work!!

Eleanore Bourner

Date: 8/30/2012 1:39:00 PM

Lovely poem. :) Goodluck in the contest! ------Ell