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At The stroke Of midnight I awaken From my deathly tomb To walk under the moon I love the velvet darkness The call of the sad whip-poor-will I have been departed long ago A hundred midnight's at the stroke of twelve ____________________________ November 11, 2015 Poetry/Etheree/Midnight Copyright Protected, ID 15-725-549-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym.

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Lu Loo

Date: 11/16/2015 2:47:00 PM

I love this form, I've never tried it. Well written, good luck in the contest :) -LU xxx

Constance La France
Date: 11/16/2015 4:54:00 PM

Thanks Laura, I think I have only done a few etheree's before and picked this form because I want to improve my short forms so I did like writing in this form very much ~

Eric Boddie

Date: 11/14/2015 1:32:00 PM

I Love this style....the sad mystery drives me wild....why the unrest, we should ask ourselves....just what happened at the stroke of 12....very intriguing bw....impressive....;)

Constance La France
Date: 11/15/2015 1:10:00 PM

Eric, happy you like my little dark poem

Nathan D.

Date: 11/13/2015 11:36:00 AM

very awesome write. love the picture and the story you tell for it

Constance La France
Date: 11/13/2015 4:40:00 PM

Thanks for the visit, Nathan, and happy you like the poem ~

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/12/2015 4:01:00 PM

I love this, and you are honing your short forms well through this contest!!

Constance La France
Date: 11/12/2015 4:31:00 PM

Hi Andrea, I am so enjoying honing my short forms skill, thanks for the visit ~

Paul Callus

Date: 11/12/2015 3:45:00 PM

This is excellent, Constance! A winning poem, in my eyes! You tempt the reader to go and watch, but I doubt if she'll appreciate the intrusion! Regards // paul

Constance La France
Date: 11/12/2015 4:28:00 PM

Thank you so much Paul for visiting and for the nice comment ~

Duke Beaufort

Date: 11/12/2015 12:30:00 PM

I am asking for an HD TV in my grave or urn so that I can follow what's going on. Life is too good to miss, and so we must come back--even as ghosts.

Constance La France
Date: 11/12/2015 1:43:00 PM

Dukes, that's funny, thanks for the visit ~

Thomas Martin

Date: 11/11/2015 6:46:00 PM

Like Poe without the onomatopoeia!!! Enjoyed very much.

Constance La France
Date: 11/11/2015 7:58:00 PM

Thomas, thanks for the visit and the comment, appreciate ~

James Inman

Date: 11/11/2015 1:47:00 PM

I second the comment below, BW. Beautiful Etheree.

Constance La France
Date: 11/11/2015 3:26:00 PM

Thank you so much