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a world shatters in pieces then breaks everything inside emotions strength to carry on slowly the pieces they come together hidden to be found fragile feelings walking a path one of tears softly moaning broken hearted i walked through hell couldn't find you just waiting that one special someone who will fix it again only to walk away to be followed i cried no one to wipe the tears i left love cold lonely nights no one to share the pillow look at the moon shine beautiful light with shadows silver reflections mixed with darkness in the soup of night looking upon stars a million miles away thinking to one self is all this just a dream are they the souls of the lost dealt a bad hand the chips are down wandering the universe asking why looking to the stars for answers in lost direction whispering gently sometimes one cries all alone in shattered dreams

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 9/15/2013 1:43:00 PM
So sad bud, well I will not buss your chops again man in tights....lol.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/15/2013 2:48:00 PM
YOU ARE OWNING UP TO THE TIGHTS HA HA ANNOUNCEMENT BEAUTIFUL COMMENT DEEPLY APPRECIATED PETER HA HA HA
Date: 9/14/2013 11:21:00 AM
Very touching... You have a tremendous gift to write.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/14/2013 12:15:00 PM
THANK YOU DEEPLY WONDERFUL COMMENT KINDLY APPRECIATED
Date: 9/13/2013 12:47:00 PM
I really felt the emotion in this poem, deep in my heart and my soul, because I have been there. In fact, I am still there! So just know that you are not alone in feeling this way...I am adding this poem to my favorites! I loved it! A very beautiful and heartfelt piece!...Thank you for the kind comments, hope you have a beautiful day, too!
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/13/2013 12:59:00 PM
THANK YOU KELLY FOR THE WONDERFUL HEARTFELT COMMENT DEEPLY APPRECIATED
Date: 9/13/2013 4:55:00 AM
No one to share the pillow with-look at the moon shine beautiful light/with shadows/ silver reflection-This is besutiful sad yet beautiful and hopeful.Rather share the pillow with just moon shadows then with a person who doesn t treat your heart the way it deserves..Excellent soul beating poem .
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/13/2013 5:48:00 AM
quack e day do leaping over the moon i shout beautiful comment as the soul is one with the stars thank you dearly charmaine heartfelt appreciated

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